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Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/12 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 8

I can't believe Brian told her that Donnie likes her. I don';t know if that's going to help fix their relatinship. I hope they can work through this. Great job! cCan't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks!!  I think Brian wants her to think Donnie has a hidden agenda!  ~ D

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/12 07:08 am Title: Chapter 8

Uh oh, Mikela's in trouble. I know her heart is with Brian but I don't think as much as she thinks it is. Nice job lady!

Author's Response:

Thanks!!  Mikela doesn't get why she's so conflicted.  I think Brian better step it up!! ~ D

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/12 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 7

I hope they can work it out. I think Brian loves Mikela, but he needs to show her.

Author's Response:

yeah, someone needs to knock some sense into him. THANKS!!!  ~ D

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/12 06:58 am Title: Chapter 7

I think Brian still needs a wake up call. I think he's just going through the motions.

Author's Response:

He does seem a bit lazy about it, doesn't he??  THANKS!! ~ D

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/12 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 6

Mikela had a good time with Donnie, but what woman wouldn't have a good time with him. Brian is dumb. How can he not realize that he's pushing Mikela away? Get with the program Littrell.

Author's Response: Who knows whatis making Brian think the way he thinks? Thanks! ~ D

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/12 11:57 am Title: Chapter 6

What an idiot. I thought he was going to change. Looks like he may just lose mikela to another man.stupid boy!

Author's Response: Some people just never learn. Thanks! ~ D

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/12 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 5

Brian better mean what he said. He doesn't realize how lucky he is to have Mikela in his life.

Author's Response: Sometimes we don't know how good we have it till it's too late. Maybe Brian will figure it out. Thanks!! ~ D

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/12 03:52 am Title: Chapter 5

"I'm here Mikela. And I'm not going anywhere."

I hope Brian really means it this time. They seem like they belong together.

Author's Response: I hope he means it too! Thanks!!~ D

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/12 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 4

If Brian doesn't get it together, he's going to lose Mikela. Get it together, Bri.

Author's Response:

He definitely needs to wake up and smell the coffee!  THANKS!! ~ D

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/12 07:19 am Title: Chapter 4

Idiot! Open your eyes big Bri or youre going to lose her!

Author's Response:

He is being a bit dense, isn't he?  THANKS! ~ D

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/12 11:46 am Title: Chapter 3

First off I love when Mikela told Nick she wasn't attracted to him. Poor Nicky, not every girl wants you, lol. Trouble's brewing. Brian better get it together. I hope this plan doesn't backfire.

Author's Response:

Yeah I think Nick's a little confused that someone doesn't want him. lol  THANKS!!! ` D

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/12 09:54 am Title: Chapter 3

Donnie's smile is always trouble. Im waiting for Brian to yank his head outta his ass& see what he has .

Author's Response:

Donnie does have a heart stopping smile! :)  THANKS!! ~ D

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/12 11:45 am Title: Chapter 2

I hope Brian and Mikela can get out of the rut they are in. it's a shame that Brian doesn't realize that things aren't the same. Men, so oblivious.

Author's Response:

They can be.  Gotta find the one that ISN'T and grab on tight!! THANKS! ~ D

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/12 06:52 am Title: Chapter 2

I hope brian isnt just spouting off a bunch of pretty words just to keep her there

Author's Response:

Seems like it, doesn't it?  THANKS!!! ~ D

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/12 06:41 am Title: Chapter 1

I love me some Brian but I have a feeling I may end up hating him before it's all over. Nice start!

Author's Response:

Thanks!!  Would you be mad at me if you end up hating him?  LOL  ~ D