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Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/13 11:16 pm Title: The Concert and Meet-N-Greet

Terrific story!



Author's Response:

thanks hun it could have been better..i wanna write another but i think  i might write it with someone

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/12 07:13 am Title: Contest

To be honest you need to work on this a lot more before attempting to write. There are a lot of run on sentences and punctuation errors....plus there is not much of a plot. It was a good try but you should work on it a bit more.

Author's Response:

thanks tracy  ..