Date: 03/27/13 11:16 pm Title: The Concert and Meet-N-Greet
Terrific story!
Author's Response:
thanks hun it could have been better..i wanna write another but i think i might write it with someone
Date: 04/25/12 07:13 am Title: Contest
To be honest you need to work on this a lot more before attempting to write. There are a lot of run on sentences and punctuation errors....plus there is not much of a plot. It was a good try but you should work on it a bit more.
Author's Response:
thanks tracy ..