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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/12 12:03 pm Title: The Business Meeting

LMAO I had to stop reading halfway once I got to Nick's part. Actually I liked AJ's random comments and the banter between everyone was pretty funny. I like how they were discussing milking Kevin, and how Nick kicked Kevin under the table. Nick's thoughts killed me completely, about zombies and wanting a tuna melt. Brian saying Leighanne being proud of him was funny as well. I laughed through this whole chapter :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, Tracy! I felt like it was important to mention the vocals because of Brian's lack of good ones and I really think it would be Kevin who notices the most since he's been gone. Glad you enjoyed the over protectedness of him. I missed that most of all! 

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/12 03:02 am Title: The Business Meeting

LMFAO I loved the zombie musings from Nick. And then him yelling "CDC!" and then trying to explain them by talking about foreign frogs. Great chapter, I like how you shifted to all five in this one for the meeting.

Author's Response:

I figured you'd enjoy the Nick part with the zombies and his random foreign frogs talk lol thanks, Rose! 

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/12 07:10 pm Title: The Business Meeting

I loved this one with all five! I actually especially loved Kevin's part, where you really dove into what he's like, and how the fans saw him as overly serious and were very quick to jump to conclusions. I definitely think that's true, and I really love how you portray the boys and their many different layers. Honestly, when I'm reading these I nearly forget that they're fiction, haha. Fantastic as usual, mare! These are such a great companion to all the photos/tweets we're getting while the boys are in London. Thank you so much for writing them! :)

Author's Response:

I'm so glad it plays as real, what a great compliment! A few people have been saying they forget this is only a story which is so awesome to hear lol the guys have been giving me great tweets and pics to work with, I mean come on, hanging out at a park together and then going to see Batman? I almost can't keep up. Thanks, Steph!! I'm so glad you're enjoying this! I plan to have the next one out by Wednesday! :-) 

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/12 03:35 am Title: The Business Meeting

Roflmao. These guys are crazy, even during meetings - lol. I ove Nick's random thoughts.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response:

LOL Thanks, Lenni!!

Reviewer: Just Marina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/12 01:35 am Title: The Business Meeting

Forgot to say 'yay to Nick kicking Kevin' lol Foreign zombie frogs...only Nick...Hey I started my reviews saying 'only you' and now I'm all 'only Nick' Seems appropriate lol :)



Author's Response:

I had to have him kick Kevin in our honor lol 

Reviewer: Just Marina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/12 01:27 am Title: The Business Meeting

More, please, I need more! And since it was mentioned here...I hate when an interviewer talks as if they are 'coming back'. They came back a long time ago, and never went away again, well, except Kevin, and we felt like kicking him because of that, but he had come to his senses now :)



Author's Response:

Me too! I find that really annoying. I still do kick Kevin when I get the chance. It's fun hehe thanks, Maria!! 

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/12 10:44 pm Title: The Business Meeting

Loved it, especially the randomness of Nick and him kicking Kevin :)  Oh, and AJ's use of words is always fun too!  I suppose it's hard to pick which songs to use, I just hope this time they make an amazing CD where every song is a good one.

Looking forward to more when you have it!



Author's Response:

Gotta love Nick's randomness! lol and AJ's crazy wording. I hope this album rocks as much as I'd like it to. I am truly excited about it! Thanks, Steph!! 

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/12 07:01 pm Title: The Business Meeting

LOL!I don't even know what to say about this chapter except LOL!this was very interesting lol.I loved it though!Good Job!Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thanks! :-) lol

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/12 05:41 pm Title: The Business Meeting

LMAO! I really enjoyed this one. Nick's whole part cracked me up, especially the whole zombie tangent - nice job getting inside his ADHD mind! You wrote the whole meeting really well, and I like your take on why the whole GMA thing was such a fail. Maybe they did plan it that way! LOL It was a good point about how a group reuniting sounds better than a group of has-beens who have always been around but not selling as well as they used to. I laughed at the part about "not dancing with any stars of any kind" and hosting game shows and stuff LOL. I also loved the "guess how long it will take before Kevin gets angry and leaves the room game" and how Kevin was in on it and would split the winnings with Howie! LMAO Awesome job, Mare!

Author's Response:

It's not always easy trying to get into ADHD Nick's head! lol about the GMA thing, thanks! I can see them thinking that way. It makes business sense and would explain a lot of. Glad you enjoyed the Kevin game lol I can see that happening too! Thanks, Julie!

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/12 03:45 pm Title: The Business Meeting

Hi Mare,

 

Loved the new chapter. Especially with Kevin stealing nicks phone like he is twelve, haha! Same thing happened to me at a meeting the other day! 

Any chance there will be chapters about Kevin's twit pic of Sunday brunch in the country side or the twit pic of Kevin in front of antlers (that made me laugh).

Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Hi Kim! I am planning on covering the sunday brunch and some of the goofier pics. Just not sure how i'm going to do that one yet lol Uh oh Seems like you both have to work on being sneakier in meetings! Thanks for the review!