Date: 07/10/12 05:22 pm Title: Chapter Two
I read this on my phone earlier but wasn't logged in. Wow, I'm loving it already! I like how Kevin is all unsure about how the guys are feeling, and I like that Nick had to actually think whether he really wanted him back. I'm so glad he is back though, woohoo!
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks Steph! I'm trying to write this as realistic as possible. I'm so glad Kevin's back too, especially with all these pictures LOL.
Date: 07/10/12 05:31 am Title: Chapter Two
I really liked the uncertainty you captured here with Nick. And OMG escape goat. *dying* I love his little Nickisms. LOL ..Update soon so I don't doo that thing I do with stories where I forget to read updates on them, okay? LOL :P
Author's Response: If anyone wasn't going to welcome Kevin back fully, I knew immediately it had to be Nick. He's simply the one who changed the most. I love Nickisms and I always need to include them in fics LMAO. I'll try to keep this updated quick, I've already got the next chapter started. Thanks Hannah!
Date: 07/09/12 08:37 pm Title: Chapter Two
LOL, "the dirty brow". Great job so far.
Author's Response: It never gets old to make fun of Kevin, hehe. Thanks MA :)
Date: 07/09/12 06:42 pm Title: Chapter Two
Aww. Such a sweet chapter. I love Nick & Kevin's relationship.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Thanks! I do too lol.
Date: 07/09/12 01:35 pm Title: Chapter Two
This was perfect, exactly how I would expect Nick to react, like a kid that had his dad walk out on him only to come around for special occasions. I am really looking forward to what the other guys will be like.
Author's Response: Basically lol. Especially since his own dad pretty much failed his family. I've got the next one started so hopefully I can update again pretty soon. Thanks Tracy!
Date: 07/09/12 12:51 pm Title: Chapter Two
Ahhhh, a Kevin/nick chapter my fav kind! I liked how wrote about how nick always felt Kevin was superior but now he hopes they are equal. Nick now reminds me of Kevin, they seem to have a lot in common. Maybe that was Kevin's influence on nick and nick looking up to him like he said in he black and blue liner notes.
Looking forward to reading more?
Sorry if there are any mistakes in this review I'm on the metro with a Korean lady leaning over me watching as I type in English fast.
Author's Response: LOL all mistakes are forgiven. I love Kevin/Nick moments too. I really think that's how their dynamic was back then. Which, it can't be now cause like you, I think they have a lot in common now that they didn't then. Glad you enjoyed it! I've got the next one going so hopefully I can have another quick update.
Date: 07/09/12 12:33 pm Title: Chapter Two
Aww a squishy Kevin & Nick chapter! I love that he called Nick little man. I hope he still does that lol it was also nice to see Kevin aw knowledge how much Nick has grown. I loved the way you had Nick rediscover the book lol it seemed so Nick! thanks for writing this! :-)
Author's Response: I love squishy Kevin and Nick, you know that LOL. OMG I hope he does too, and somewhere we can hear him do it lmao. I'd squee. I like to think Kevin's seen it, but I also feel like Nick would need to hear it. With the book, LMAO thanks. I have no idea how he remembered it since he admitted it took him years to read it. I just figured it was the most Nick-ish way to go hehe. And you're welcome! I've been so inspired it's great lol. I'm happy I gave you a new fic to enjoy :).
Date: 07/09/12 12:22 pm Title: Chapter Two
I already shared my thoughts on this chapter, but just wanted to leave a review and say again that I enjoyed it! It was interesting to see Nick's mixed feelings about Kevin's return, and his reasons for partly not wanting Kevin to come back are justified. But obviously I'm glad he accepted Kevin's return. You really showed how much Nick has grown as a person, and I'm curious to see how their dynamic might be different now that Nick is more on the same level as Kevin, as far as maturity. Great job, ZDR, keep it up!!
Author's Response: I always love hearing them again! Feed my ego! (Oh wait then I'll be like she-who-must-not-be-named... LMAO). Thanks! It's weird how Nick's Kevin-esque in a lot of ways these days. And so of course I couldn't help but touch on it. That and writing Kevin/Nick scenes is just fun and fuzzy feeling LOL. Thankies!
