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Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/12 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 28

Haha, I enjoyed the beginning of this where Nick said he was basically Kevin's bitch! Also liked Nick taking the driving lessons and getting his license. I liked how you ended the chapter with him saying he'd had two victories that day and I also really enjoyed his conversation with Brian and how stern he was trying to be, but how their conversation quickly morphed into less serious territory. That part where Brian was like "Bella's a goat, Nick!" LOL. Loved it :)

Author's Response: Nick and Brian can never be serious for too long. I love writing those two. I want to do more with them in the future. Thanks as always for your reviews :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/12 03:06 am Title: Epilogue

Absolutely loved this story! Would love a sequel with them & their families & kids - lol.

~Lenni~



Author's Response: Thank you, that is an awesome compliment. I might do a one shot for Thanksgiving or something but this was meant as a stand alone story. Glad you enjoyed :)

Reviewer: BSBShania Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/12 01:16 am Title: Epilogue

Howie the janitor??????? LoL!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/12 02:10 am Title: Chapter 29

Wow. Graduation all ready! Whoot!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: Time flies. Thanks Lenni!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/12 02:00 am Title: Chapter 28

Lmao. I'm surprised Nick's driving at all.

~Lenni~



Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Lenni!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 04:22 am Title: Chapter 27

Lmao. I figured they'd sleep together.

I love him & Brian as brothers. They mesh well.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: That is a huge compliment. Thank you, Lenni!

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 04:06 am Title: Chapter 27

Awww this chapter was so cute and sweet and funny and heartwarming all at the same time! I love how they went fishing and Nick had this deep moment of being introspective, and then he was thinking back to when he first met Brian and he was feeling all happy, and then Brian just totally ruined the little moment Nick had created in his head with his "You gonna frame it?" comment? LOL classic Frick and Frack. Really enjoyed this chapter!

Author's Response: Brian always has to ruin the moment. Thanks so much for the review, and I'm sorry it took so long to respond Steph!

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/12 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 26

Hahaha that Kevin pulled a fast one on them and took them to Miami anyway! Brilliant. Also that they are sushi. Mmmm I want sushi now, and I just had it yesterday! I'm glad that he seemed to be feeling a little more confident around girls after the whole Crystal debacle, but it still seems so funny to me that Nick's the one who is awkward around girls and thinks Brian's the big womanizer, lol. Still, I'm glad a Laura came clean to Nick about the bet. The booze seems to be turning him into the Nick that we all know and love, ha! What a charmer, that guy. Really enjoyed these last two chapters, Tracy :)

Author's Response: Like I've said before I love that I can do this in an AU. Womanizing Brian is love. I wanted to make Laura kinda different than Crystal, she's not as much of a bitch. Your theory about the alcohol is somewhat correct. It always lets go of your inhibitions. Thanks for the review, glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/12 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 25

LOL at Nick's description of how Brian described Miami like it was his job. Awww. Also them listening to the radio. Man, I wonder what BSB would be like if it wasn't the five guys we know. I mean, can you imagine anyone other than Nick crooning out "Am I sexual?" I really can't! Haha. I feel bad for poor Brian, but I can't really blame him for being in a funk and questioning everything he knows. He must feel like his whole life has been a lie. Poor guy. Hopefully their fishing trip turns out well!

Author's Response: Brian is feeling really alienated because he doesn't know anything anymore. It's his family's fault. I loved them listening to the radio too and I also wonder how they react listening to themselves from back then. It is really interesting to me :) thanks so much Steph.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/12 05:14 am Title: Chapter 26

I hate how all the girls take advantage of Nick & treat him like shit.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: :( me too. Thanks for the review, Lenni!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/12 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 25

I hope Brian's not too disappointed about their trip - lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: He probably won't be lol thanks for the review Lenni!

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/12 05:25 am Title: Chapter 24

Oh mannn. Well I can't really blame Brian for being mad at his mother, she really should have told him a long time ago. Poor guy that he feels so lost that he needed to turn to getting drunk out of his mind to have to deal with it, but I guess sometimes that's what you gotta do. He's lucky that he's got Nick to watch out for him, even when he pukes on him - haha! Also loved the bit about Howie having to switch colleges lol. Really enjoyed this one, Tracy!

Author's Response: :/ poor Brian indeed. He is feeling pretty lost at the moment and just needs to deal with it all. Nick is there to help even when Brian is puking on him. Haha Payback! I thought Howie needed some karma brought to him ;) thanks for the review Steph!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/12 12:20 am Title: Chapter 24

Roflmao. These two should not drink - nothing good ever comes from it.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. His mother should've told him long ago.



Author's Response: LOL yeah they don't agree with liquor. Thanks for the review, Lenni!

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/12 05:31 am Title: Chapter 23

Awwww Nick finally told him! I'm glad that even though they fought (which like, totally justified, Brian. Nick should have just told him then, since he was so mad for everyone else keeping the secret!), they were able to make up even though some time had passed. They definitely act enough like brothers, haha! Brian seemed to take it well, but it seemed like he's also in a bit of shock. I know I probably would be if I was in his situation! Great update, Tracy :)

Author's Response: Yeah I agree, pretty ironic Nick was mad at everyone but kept it as well. I don't blame Brian one bit for yelling at him. I'm glad they seem to act like brothers. Thanks for the review Steph!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/12 05:00 am Title: Chapter 23

I'm glad SOMEONE finally got off their damn ass & told Brian!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review Lenni!