Date: 09/05/12 01:37 am Title: 4. The Outsider
Riiiiight Nick keep telling yourself that. Hmmm obviously there's some ulterior motive for bringing her along that he hasn't admitted to himself about, which is why he's kinda in denial right now. He's 34 and he's hanging out with a 21 year old. The breakup with Lauren sounds like it was a nasty one.
I liked what you threw in about twitter and I think that's why Nick doesn't use it in real life as well, because if I was him I wouldn't either. Btw I looked up that 1Dupdates one and it is uber creepy how people know everything they are doing. I'm glad I don't follow many 1D fans. Sorry for the long review lol I am liking this story a lot.
Author's Response: He definitely has an ulterior motive, even if he doesn't consciously know it yet or want to admit it. But yeah, awkward that he's 34 and hanging around with this 21 year old. And the other guys totally see it too and think he's being ridiculous, of course. You'll learn more about his breakup with Lauren in coming chapters ;) I really think Nick is eluded by twitter in real life, since he's so private. 1DUpdates is so, so creepy. That's not even the worst one, there's a tracking1D or stalking1D or something, I forget what exactly it's called but they're horrible and actually post the hotels the boys are at. I'm glad there's nothing like that for BSB, but of course if we had twitter in 1999 there probably would have been. Thanks for the review, Tracy! Glad you're liking it!
Date: 09/04/12 03:37 pm Title: 4. The Outsider
Hrm me thinks the lady doth protest too much! LOL He probably brought her for what he said but deep down, where he can't even admit it to himself yet, he likes her and wants her... wooooooo
Author's Response: Hmmm we'll see! And yeah basically Brittany is the queen of bad decision making and stubbornness. As you will learn haha.
Date: 09/03/12 08:45 pm Title: 4. The Outsider
I love the whole Twitter thing and the stalker fans knowing everything, lol. Nick is quite naive about stuff, but it's sweet!
Author's Response: lol yeah Nick is quite naive and doesn't know much about twitter... or just doesn't really care to haha! Thanks Steph!
Date: 09/03/12 06:15 pm Title: 4. The Outsider
This story got me really excited again. I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 09/02/12 06:47 pm Title: 4. The Outsider
Nicks delusion in this chapter is clear lol I really enjoyed their discussion about twitter and I imagine that is how it would really go if it happened in real life :P
Author's Response: lol Nick is so delusional. I enjoyed writing about twitter and how Nick just...fails at it haha. Thanks Julia! <3
