Date: 10/10/12 06:10 am Title: 32. The Malibu House
Omgwtfbbqfhskdnc how did I miss this chapter?! What. Brain. Exploding.
Author's Response: It was just supposed to be random too, the he just drops dead without warning, but I read a book about writing that said in real life people do just randomly die of heart attacks, but you can't do that in fiction without planting some kind of seed for the reader. And I figured that book was talking to me, so I went back and changed it. The power of having things pre-written!
Date: 10/09/12 04:28 pm Title: 32. The Malibu House
WHAT!!!!!! Excuse me while I set my phone to map out how to get to Winnipeg to come kick your ass!!!! what the hell just happened there!! PSHAW I KNEW Nick was gonna kick the bucket! I just knew it! you evil little 1D turncoat, you can't even make it all BSB happy..? now what is she going to go back to Niall!!? oh my gosh!!
How crappy to lose your best friend like that. *sigh*
:-D
Author's Response: Hahaha, see it was all just a ploy to get you guys to come visit me in Winnipeg! Muhahaha. Yeah, Nick was totally doomed to kick the bucket from the beginning, even before 1D was a part of this story or even on my radar at all. LOL I just can't let Nick be happy in any story ever! Thanks for the review, Lore :)
Date: 10/09/12 04:11 pm Title: 32. The Malibu House
Noooooooooooooooo
I was hoping it was a dream or something like that, and that she'd wake up and realise she really did love him and they'd live happily ever after :( Poor Nick, dying in his sleep and never having found true love. I was actually holding back the tears at the thought of that, him thinking he was unloved :(
I know she loved him as a friend and I just hope that she has someone to turn to who can help her through this awful time...maybe a blonde boybander from Ireland perhaps?
Even though I'm gutted and sad you killed Nick, I still love this story Steph!
Author's Response: I know right, poor Nick. It's so sad, but I had planned for him dying from the start - even before this was going to be a 1D/BSB story in my original idea for it. Brittany will likely have someone to turn to, and you are probably right in your prediction but we'll see what happens! Thanks for the review, Steph :) Glad you're still enjoying it in spite of Nick dying!
Date: 10/09/12 12:59 pm Title: 32. The Malibu House
WHAT?!!!!.....I did not see that coming. *I need a moment....* cries.....
Author's Response: Sorrrrry :( Thanks for the review
Date: 10/09/12 12:31 pm Title: 32. The Malibu House
I don't like this anymore my dad died of a heartattack he died in a chair in his sleep :-( it's not a story it's real life
Author's Response: Sorry to hear that! :(
Date: 10/09/12 05:16 am Title: 32. The Malibu House
OH MY GOD!!! I SO DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING!!
Author's Response: Aw sorry! Thanks Ali!
Date: 10/09/12 04:16 am Title: 32. The Malibu House
OMG i did not see this coming at all
Author's Response: Sorrrrry! Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/09/12 03:58 am Title: 32. The Malibu House
OMG WHAT THE HELL?!?! I totally didn't see that coming and was about ready to sob when I read that! I'm mad at you now LOL!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Sorrrry! Don't be mad - there's still more Nick stuff to come! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 10/09/12 02:20 am Title: 32. The Malibu House
IM SO SAD... SERIOUSLY.. ugh that was hard to read.. i can't even imagine something happeneing to him.. oh man..
Author's Response: Awwww sorry! I can't imagine something like that happening to him either :( Thanks!
Date: 10/09/12 12:45 am Title: 32. The Malibu House
Dammit. I'd called him dying. I wish he hadn't. Damn. Damn. Damn.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. I'd a 1 Direction/BSB dream last night - lol. And I don't even know what 1 Direction looks like.
Author's Response: You did call him dying! And clearly I have been a good influence if you've been dreaming about 1D LOL. Thanks Lenni! :)
Date: 10/09/12 12:36 am Title: 32. The Malibu House
Ok so I WAS right about him being sicker than he let on. Wow. I never expected this to happen so soon, and it came so suddenly....like "Nick's dead" I went WTF and yelled at my phone screen. The convo Brittany remembered was probably deeper than she though, and its so sad she didn't really get to say goodbye, but at least he went without pain. Can't wait to see more, and don't worry I'm still friends lol
Author's Response: Yep you were right.. you thought it was sudden now, like I said on Yahoo, the original draft didn't even have the lead up. Just BAM! Nick's dead! lol. The convo with Nick was deeper than she thought. More will sort of come of that later. I'm sad she didn't get to say goodbye also, but the Nick stuff's not totally done yet. Haha, glad we're still friends! Thanks Tracy :)