Date: 09/06/12 12:36 am Title: 7. The Deck Party
Nick's kinda a creeper in this story lol. He looks like he's trying to distract both himself and Brittany from both of their breakups by having some fun. The fin drinks sound pretty good. I am kinda annoyed by Brittany but I feel bad about how all the wives are treating her, just because of Nick....I hope things get less awkward but also more awkward lol great update!
Author's Response: lol yeah, he really, really is. I think you're right that he's trying to distract both himself and Brittany from their breakups. I'm personally not so into the fin drinks because they have coconut in it and I really hate coconut, but I do like the cup that it comes in, lol! Brittany is kind of annoying, she does a lot of dumb stuff, and so does Nick so I guess they make a good pair haha. It does suck how the wives are treating her though, it's not her fault that Nick is being completely ridic. I love how you're like "I hope things get less awkward but also more awkward" haha! We'll see what happens... ;) Thanks for the review Tracy! Glad you like it!
Date: 09/05/12 11:55 pm Title: 7. The Deck Party
wow she had an insightful thought! LOL... I know Brittney is the main character but she kind of annoys me! LOL I want to read an interaction with a fan. LOL more more more
Author's Response: Hahaha! She is pretty annoying, and she annoyed a lot of people in the last story she was in too. And yeah she was sort of insightful! It figures, as soon as she and Nick start drinking LOL. Thanks Lore :)
Date: 09/05/12 08:35 pm Title: 6. The Age Gap
Maybe Danielle can forgive a cheater, but it seems Brittany has highrer standards than that...good for her!
Had to laugh at her thinking ITITW was their first song, and her birthday being when the group started! No wonder he feels old, lol.
Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Yeah, Brittany's stubbornness is definitely working in her favour this time! Her birthday was already outlined as that when I started the 1D story with her in it earlier this year... but I couldn't help mentioning it in here, haha. Thanks Steph :)
Date: 09/05/12 04:52 pm Title: 6. The Age Gap
is that really her bday!! LOL, it makes it funny for the story but really? LOL Her friend didn't think it strange that Nick suddenly invited her but Rochelle does, well I guess Rochelle knows him better. OOOOOH how is Leighanne going to react to her????? and the fans??? oh my gosh I can't wait!
Author's Response: LOL yeah, when I came up with my original character sketch for Brittany when I was writing the 1D fic I put that as her birthday cause you know, I had to make her born in 1993 so why not. Originally I had a much longer scene where it was one of the Backstreet trivia questions, but I cut it out cause it was lame haha. And yeah I think Rochelle would find it a lot weirder than Danielle would because not only is Danielle younger, she also doesn't know Nick at all. And yes Leighanne! I did write a little moment between her and Leighanne and I think it's in the next chapter. Thanks for the review, Lore! :)
Date: 09/05/12 03:04 am Title: 6. The Age Gap
I kinda feel bad for her because Nick is making it super awkward by inadvertently reminding her how young she is and how old he is. I hope she doesn't get freaked out too much. Awww that Niall is moping about, he should for cheating :P another great chapter :)
Author's Response: Nick is making it so awkward! And he's being so creepy too with his dumb shower comment. Hopefully she doesn't get too freaked out. And yeah Niall is back in Europe moping around, fitting since that's all he did in I Wish too lol. Thanks for the reviews, Tracy! Glad you're enjoying it :)
Date: 09/05/12 02:59 am Title: 5. The Ex-Girlfriend Factor
Wow Rochelle is kinda a bitch lol. Glad she respected Brittany when she told her off though. I like the visual you gave with shirtless Nick....I enjoyed that very much :) Brittany could always call Niall but she seems like she's too proud to do that. Great update
Author's Response: LOL yeah Rochelle was a total bitch, but you can sorta see why - she's mad that Lauren's not there. I enjoyed thinking about the visual of shirtless Nick as I was writing this! And yeah, Brittany is way too stubborn to call Niall. Plus he cheated on her, so eh, no phonecall for him lol. Thanks! :)
Date: 09/05/12 01:37 am Title: 4. The Outsider
Riiiiight Nick keep telling yourself that. Hmmm obviously there's some ulterior motive for bringing her along that he hasn't admitted to himself about, which is why he's kinda in denial right now. He's 34 and he's hanging out with a 21 year old. The breakup with Lauren sounds like it was a nasty one.
I liked what you threw in about twitter and I think that's why Nick doesn't use it in real life as well, because if I was him I wouldn't either. Btw I looked up that 1Dupdates one and it is uber creepy how people know everything they are doing. I'm glad I don't follow many 1D fans. Sorry for the long review lol I am liking this story a lot.
Author's Response: He definitely has an ulterior motive, even if he doesn't consciously know it yet or want to admit it. But yeah, awkward that he's 34 and hanging around with this 21 year old. And the other guys totally see it too and think he's being ridiculous, of course. You'll learn more about his breakup with Lauren in coming chapters ;) I really think Nick is eluded by twitter in real life, since he's so private. 1DUpdates is so, so creepy. That's not even the worst one, there's a tracking1D or stalking1D or something, I forget what exactly it's called but they're horrible and actually post the hotels the boys are at. I'm glad there's nothing like that for BSB, but of course if we had twitter in 1999 there probably would have been. Thanks for the review, Tracy! Glad you're liking it!
Date: 09/04/12 04:02 pm Title: 5. The Ex-Girlfriend Factor
well you know Britney if you miss Niall that much YOU can call him too to talk. Sure he hasn't called you but you broke up with him. Huh, Rochelle was kind of mean but Britney did better deflecting that crap from her then the entire Niall stuff. The cruise will be interesting! :)
Author's Response: Yeah she did a good job of deflecting that crap with Rochelle, but I think she's probably used to girls being bitches to her for no reason. And yep, queen of stubbornness LOL this isn't the first time she's dumped Niall and completely avoided him while being totally depressed about it. Thanks for the reviews, Lore :) Glad you're liking it!
Date: 09/04/12 03:37 pm Title: 4. The Outsider
Hrm me thinks the lady doth protest too much! LOL He probably brought her for what he said but deep down, where he can't even admit it to himself yet, he likes her and wants her... wooooooo
Author's Response: Hmmm we'll see! And yeah basically Brittany is the queen of bad decision making and stubbornness. As you will learn haha.
Date: 09/04/12 03:23 pm Title: 3. The Rash Decision
I am sure he was just being insightful by accident. LOL ... though he does make you wonder sometimes. I am excited to see what transpires on the cruise!! yay! mmm Kevin... oh wait he's not a main character in this stop it Lore, stop it! LOL.
Author's Response: LOL he probably was just being insightful by accident. Oh Nick *pets* but I think he has a lot of wisdom that he might not really know what to do with. Yay Kevin! He does make a couple of important appearances as the story goes on so that'll be fun! :)
Date: 09/03/12 10:59 pm Title: 5. The Ex-Girlfriend Factor
Great update I can't wait for Nick and her to get together.please update soon.
Author's Response: We'll see what happens ;) Haha, thanks! I'll update soon!
Date: 09/03/12 10:30 pm Title: 5. The Ex-Girlfriend Factor
I like asshole Nick. Definitely one of my favourite Nick varieties. You should post more or just let me read the whole thing :P
Author's Response: Asshole Nick is easily the most fun to write. I'll post more soon :P Thanks for the review, mon ami! <3
Date: 09/03/12 09:19 pm Title: 5. The Ex-Girlfriend Factor
Rochelle was a bitch to her, but I suppose she was still pissed off about the whole Lauren thing. I hope things will be OK now that she got all that out of her system.
Mmm, Nick taking his shirt off, what a lovely thought!
Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Hopefully things will be ok now that Rochelle let off some steam, yeah! I guess she was just saying to Brittany what Lauren would, but still, yeesh. But I guess it was all made better by her getting the visual of Nick shirtless? lol that'd make me feel better! Thanks again, Steph :) Glad you like it!
Date: 09/03/12 08:45 pm Title: 4. The Outsider
I love the whole Twitter thing and the stalker fans knowing everything, lol. Nick is quite naive about stuff, but it's sweet!
Author's Response: lol yeah Nick is quite naive and doesn't know much about twitter... or just doesn't really care to haha! Thanks Steph!
Date: 09/03/12 06:15 pm Title: 4. The Outsider
This story got me really excited again. I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
