Date: 09/10/12 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 15
oh another thing taking over. Nick feels at home in AJ's house. He took Rochelle to the arcade where AJ used to like to take her on dates, he really is developing AJ traits. :)
Date: 09/10/12 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 14
I wonder what Lauren talked to him about in private. I wonder why Nick was locked away for the rest of the evening.
Date: 09/09/12 03:11 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh.
I think i see whays going on here...:)
More please !
Date: 09/08/12 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ok, now Im curios. What did Lauren told him that he went MIA? He didnt even ate pizza. Something is definetly wrong.
Date: 09/08/12 01:06 am Title: Chapter 13
French toast, yummy!! Im glad they went out and have fun. I have a little feeling of where this story could be going, jummm, it could work,lol. Hope to read more soon.
Date: 09/07/12 02:22 am Title: Chapter 12
Im glad she heard them. Hopefully this will help her with the feelings shes been having towards Nick. And poor Nick, he shouldnt feel that way, hope he gets some help.
Date: 09/07/12 02:21 am Title: Chapter 11
I was wondering if someone would hear those messagess and Im glad she remembered them. I think it would help ner with how shes lloking at Nick now.
Date: 09/06/12 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 13
You know I've said on Twitter that when I see Rochelle tweet I feel bad for her and her loss... lol that's how realistic your story reads. I love that they consipred to go to Vegas, I'd be ticked if my husband did that behind my back without telling me. I have no problem if he wants a guys trip somewhere as long as I know where he is. :) And I'm glad Rochelle is learning that she is not the only person who is going to feel a huge loss with AJ's death. Nick and the others are like brothers to him and have a long history with him.
Date: 09/06/12 11:15 am Title: Chapter 12
wow - I donīt know what to say! I love your story!!! You are really good..... I canīt wait for the next chapter! ;)
Date: 09/06/12 10:25 am Title: Chapter 10
Aw come on Ro. I know it must be hard, but its not Nicks fault.
Date: 09/05/12 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh man, all of these were so perfect. I love how you displayed Nick's friendship with AJ and his grief through them. Like, he'll tell AJ this funny little anecdote and then later he'll be mad at him for dying, then he'll call him and apologize... gah. It's so real and so raw. You write Nick so well, because I could completely picture him doing this and saying all of these things. I don't blame Rochelle for listening to them, I probably would have too, I'd be too curious not too! I also loved how you showed Nick's subconscious affection for her through these messages, like where he picked out the zebra print or how he thought he saw her and his heart did a jump. Ahh! I loves it. :)
Date: 09/05/12 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 12
well she sort of asked for it listening to Nick's messages to AJ! How did you think you were going to feel Rochelle? I know you mentioned something about this chapter being awkward to write but it read really well. :) I can't wait for more, this story is great!
Date: 09/05/12 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 11
she's going to listen to Nick's messages to AJ? I don't know how to take that. I mean AJ isn't going to hear them but it's a way for Nick to talk to his friend like those who go to the graves to talk to them. wow, not sure what I think of what she is doing.
Healthy food can sometimes taste good. There are some seasonings without salt that help :) LOL
And what is Lauren seeing the Dr for? hrm?
Date: 09/05/12 10:11 am Title: Chapter 7
I'm so glad that he wasnt mad at her. I can't even imagine losing my bestie. No way! Great chapter
Date: 09/05/12 10:04 am Title: Chapter 7
I'm so glad that he wasnt mad at her. I can't even imagine losing my bestie. No way! Great chapter
