Date: 08/30/12 02:06 am Title: Chapter 2
Well crap for the first time in a really long time a story got me teary eyed. I loved Ro's part I could feel her anger and pains. Plus she's my fave BSB wife!
Author's Response: Rochelle has always been one of my favorites of the BSB wives to write because I like making her super quirky. She always seems to have random talents and knowledge that none of the other characters I've ever written have come up with (for example, I've had her know Japanese before, things like that) and it's always fun to see what she's going to randomly know in each story she's portrayed in. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!! thank you for the review!! <3
Date: 08/30/12 01:51 am Title: Chapter 1
I like how detailed you are without being too wordy! And holy crap I hope it's not what I'm thinking. Oh and somehow I like Lauren here. lol
Author's Response: It's a challenge sometimes not overkilling the detail. I usually write these long strings of detail and then go back and edit 99.99999% of it out so I end up with like 2-3 sentences of details kind of sprinkled around... like seasoning on food, I guess. Too much is gross, but just right is a balance that's hard to acheive sometimes. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I'm also glad you're liking Lauren here! I'm working hard to make her likable! lol Thanks for the review! <3
Date: 08/29/12 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
So far this is amazing! Where is the star rating thingy?! I need it for your stories! Soooo ***** haha!
I loved the scene at the beginning with Nick and Lauren. It was so heartbreaking and hopeful at the same time, because obviously Nick doesn't know what's going on, and it was good of Lauren not to tell him. I also loved the scene with AJ and Rochelle, when she put their tattoos together, wah! He was so stupid to follow her, but it's so fitting that Nick's going to get his heart and gah. Hannah, this story is so amazing! I loved the bit at the end with Brian. The last line was perfection. I love how you're using the real girlfriends and wives in this too. I just love it. Love it, love it, love it. It's all so real, and I'm somewhat convinced you've made friends with Nick while living in Nashville because you write them so well! Haha.
Looooove xx
Author's Response: LOL I wish I'd made friends with Nick in Nashville! Thus far the only celebrity sighting we've had is a Christian singer (who sucks kinda) named Derek Webb. It was really random. LOL But anyways I'm glad you find it so realistic. That's what I go for when I write. I like including reality (ie., the real girlfriends, etc) because I mean technically they're "canon" now and it just seems like that's part of the challenge - fitting a story into actual life events and tour dates and stuff. I dunno, I like being accurate. lol I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much!! Thank you for your mini-novel reviews. They make me squee. <3
Date: 08/29/12 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love it so far.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!!
Date: 08/29/12 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
omg! wow, can't wait for the next post. awsome story
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks so much for the review <3
Date: 08/29/12 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Banana~ where you get these ideas from I'll never know. hooked already. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: They just kind of pop up and manifest themselves! Thank you so much for reading & reviewing!! <3
Date: 08/29/12 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
You've pulled me out my non reading fanfiction funk! LOVE THIS! I am excited to see if this goes the way I'm thinking its going ;) MORE!
Author's Response: Glad to have yanked you back to the fiction reading world! I hope you're still enjoying the story! Thanks so much for the review <3
Date: 08/29/12 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
holy crap! I don't know what else to say at this point.
Author's Response: Your speechlessness is appreciated. ;) <3
Date: 08/29/12 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh no! Oh my GOD!
Author's Response: lol "OMG" seems to be the unaminous reaction to the opening of this story! Thanks for the review. <3
Date: 08/29/12 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
H.O.L.Y.
F.U.C.K.
Author's Response: lmao... This review is quite classic. Thanks <3
Date: 08/29/12 06:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Ahhh great start Hannah! As always the little details you add are so perfect, with the dogs surveying the scene and such. It makes everything play out just like a movie. Is Nick going to get AJ's heart? OMG. I hope that's the case lol because I had watched a show with a plotline sort of like that, and had kind of wanted to write a story like that but if this story is that and you're writing it than I can just read it and...yaaay!
A little ahead of myself with my predictions.
Anyway I really liked this chapter, and I'm really excited to see where you're going to take this. :)
Author's Response: Aw yay mininovel reviews! <3 Thanks so much for reading!! The idea for this story has been playing around in my head since I read of a situation like this while researching heart conditions for Borrowed Time. I was half contemplating making it a Brian/Nick thing until I realized that Nick's heart is crap too! LOL I think what I have planned for this fits much better with Nick/AJ anyway and it's going to be a fun time getting it written. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
