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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 8

He's such a guy. Lmao but I'd do the same thing, play games instead of cleaning or unpacking...make sure the cords are tidy. I can relate. She called him a husband. I'm sure THAT won't go over well. Really enjoying this and looking forward to the next chapter. I love that you're using comedy and drama to balance out the romance. Great job!

Author's Response:

I will do that, too! I won't touch my Wii for the longest time but as soon as I need to be doing something else I'm like "I really want to play a game..." :P A new chapter is on the way!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 7

I love the commentary on their fight, like Nick riling women up on purpose to get turned on. He's such a tease. Haha

Author's Response:

I tried to channel his real ability to tease us all into this lol

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 6

Yikes. They argue a lot but I think they will be ok. New couples always have a hard time adjusting at first and I'm sure her family didn't help much. I'm a dog person myself and I think it was cute for him to care so much about them, but "furry kids" goes a bit far.

Author's Response:

I think the fur kids thing is pretty funny. My mum treats her dog like he is her son and it is so amusing. I'm constantly going, "you know he doesn't speak English... right??" lol

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wow Peggy's dad is a real douche. I like that they're trying to get to know him but that is not the way to go about it. I'm sure the assistant didn't help much either. Can't wait to see what else comes at these two!

Author's Response:

I think her dad is just misunderstood! :P

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 4

"can I touch your tits?" LMAO that was my favorite line of the chapter. This and Nick yelling at Peggy's asshole brother. Brilliant. I cracked up a lot during this one. Still enjoying it :)

Author's Response:

I wanted to add some funny moments here and there so that it wasn't all serious all the time! It obviously worked! :P

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 11:58 am Title: Chapter 3

LOL I love the awkwardness of Peggy's family and poor Nick constantly putting his foot in his mouth. I highly love this chapter, it was very entertaining.

Author's Response:

Nick does have a certain knack for embarrassing himself, doesn't he? haha

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 11:16 am Title: Chapter 2

I love the New York City talk, that's my favorite place to visit but SO expensive. I'd never be able to afford it, and I laughed at Nick's reaction to the Dakota. Haha. These two are disagreeing a lot but you know what they say. Opposites attract. I like that they talk things over though. Loving this, Julia!

Author's Response:

Holy reviews, Batman! lol Get ready for some responses :P I'm glad you seem to be liking it!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1

This story was recommended to me and I had been hesitant at first because it is a romance, and I read very little of it. However it intrigued me because you were the one writing it, and I've really enjoyed things in the past so I thought I would give it a shot :)

So far it seems to be really good, I love the details and description, and I like the premise of it. I look forward to reading more and seeing where these two end up!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tracy, I'm glad to know you're giving it a shot despite your reluctance. I assure you it's filled with more drama than romance lol

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/12 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 8

This chapter had me laughing out loud in places, how emabarrassing to be caught in his undies by two women he'd never met before!  And him thinking he'd worked hard by tidying the TV cables.  Men eh!  Typical he let the h-word escape his mind for a few minutes, lol. 



Author's Response:

Haha men do the smallest things and think they moved mountains, eh? :P

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/12 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 8

LOL that is too funny but really with the ladies right upstairs, though with chance of getting caught there is always more excitment ... not that I'd know anything about that.   mmmm Nick plays video games in his undies, how true do you think that is? I kind of think it could be. heehee thanks for the bonus chapter! I am enjoying this so far and can't wait to see where it goes from here. :)



Author's Response:

I like to think it's very true... at least it's a nice visual! lol

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/12 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 7

LOL I don't fold my clothes that are going into drawers either, I just iron them when I need them :)

Ugh, the wet towels and dirty clothes on the floor is such a man thing, I'm so glad I don't have that to put up with!  

Great chapter, really enjoying this :)



Author's Response:

It really is a man thing, isn't it? lol Thanks for reading, I'm about to post another chapter!

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/12 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 7

It really seems that the only thing they have in common is the sex ;) nothing more....

Author's Response:

Nah, they have lots more in common than that they just need to discover it yet :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/12 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 7

ah the little things the never EVER seem to go away no matter how long you live with them.  I feel their pain.  Though Nick was kind of an ass about the towel thing! Really Nick, pick the damn thing up.  oh games, I wonder how Peggy will take that.



Author's Response:

It's amazing how many little things you can discover once you start spending time with someone! haha thanks for reading!

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/12 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 6

still not a fan of this girl hihi

Author's Response:

Aww, I hope she finds her way into your heart eventually! lol Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/12 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 6

wow they are going to find out exactly how wrong they are for each other.  I'm not a huge dog person too but I think if I was in a relationship with someone who already had a dog I would get over it and maybe we could talk about replacing/not replacing the pet when they passed.  I don't like that "fur kid" thing either.  My little dogs are our pets even though we call each other their "mama" and "papa".    thanks for updating!! I soo can't wait to read all the drama, I know it's gonna be good from all the build up already!!



Author's Response:

There might just be a fair bit of drama on the way lol Thanks for reading!