Date: 09/17/14 10:23 pm Title: § Message #14 §
Yay, I'm happy you did this o/, we two have to revive the Brian/Nick romance stories on this page! :)
To the chapter, I really enjoyed it, I could really feel for Brian when I read the words. The empty house, leaving so much darkness in Brians heart, so sad.
What I also enjoyed to read was how Brian is blaming himself for it now... it's so full of drama, just like I enjoy it.
You also did a great job creating the atmosphere of this chapter, by how Brian was describing everything I got a good idea about how it looks like, and how a heap of darkness is laying on everything kinda...
the only negative thing really is that it's already over :) I could go on reading for hours :)
Author's Response: Just like a wise man said "stop dreaming, start doing". So I've started! lol
These first chapters are short but it's mostly cause they are from Brian's pov and, right now, Brian is in that state where nothing really matters. As he will start to stand up, the chapters are going to be a little longer. :)
So, yes, there is a light at the end of the tunnel for Brian. But I love to put him through hell so there is still a lot he has to go through! lol #Oops
Thank you so much!
