Date: 07/28/13 03:36 am Title: Chapter 2
This is such a good story. Please update soon.
Date: 02/28/13 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is such a great story. Please continue it.
Date: 11/16/12 07:46 am Title: Chapter 2
I said he'd get Alyssa.
UPDATE!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 11/16/12 04:53 am Title: Chapter 2
it good so far Please i want to read more
Date: 10/24/12 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to read more.. Please update
Date: 10/18/12 03:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh. I bet he gets Alyssa.
UPDATE!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm enjoying writing this story because its pushing me to write things I didn't think I could... sorrow. I plan to.update soon!
Date: 10/18/12 02:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Pretty good so far, u really showed some emotions in the writing. I'm going to guess Nick's lawyer is calling about his niece.
Author's Response: Thank you, I tried to get a crossed the sorrow without it being too terribly depressing. Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/18/12 01:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Really good writing and a tough subject to tackle. Keep it up! :)
Author's Response: No kidding, very tough subject. Thank you very much tho!
Date: 10/17/12 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Pretty good so far!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope the next chapter will be better. I re-wrote chapter one four times just cause I was unsure how to begin the story. LOL. But again, thank you!