Date: 08/23/13 08:39 am Title: :: Nineteen::
OMG JUST Read it all at once loving this hope the babies both make it ..I hate jane carter she is an evil crazy bitch love love the story prayin for a happy ending update soon
Author's Response: thank you so much! I am glad you like it i just got done with the next chapter i am hoping to have it posted within the next day or two.
Date: 08/22/13 07:09 pm Title: :: Nineteen::
Ohh man I hope baby 2 will be ok..great job can't wait for more
Date: 08/15/13 12:53 am Title: :: Sixteen::
Oooo cant wait for more
Date: 08/14/13 12:02 pm Title: :: Fifteen ::
I can't wait for more..update soon..great story so far
Author's Response: thank you so much! I am glad you are enjoying it :) another chapter should be out hopefully later today.
Date: 11/20/12 10:26 am Title: :::Two:::
I feel bad for Rayna, she is holding on for dear life, for someone who seems like they didn't want to be there in the first place. I mean the guy got a job OUT of STATE. I know people do it all the time, but most don't do it to escape from their responsibilities.
As for Nicholas, I am glad that he talked things over with Brian. He needed some good advice, and Brian's not only looking out for him he genuinely cares for him like a brother.
I enjoyed this chapter, like Nick said, hopefully Rayna will learn when she closes one door it paves the way for more doors to open.
Keep writing! :0)
Date: 11/12/12 04:13 pm Title: :::One::
I'm liking this story so far. We've gotten a little bit of background on both characters and their situations at this point.
I feel sorry for Nick, he's just broken it off from a three year relationship. Being with someone that length of time then suddenly being by your self can be pretty rough.
As for nameless woman :), I feel bad for in a long distance pretty much non existent relationship, she is stuck being a single mother. It's hard when you're the only one doing it especially with two small children.
Now I'm curious as to how this leads up to them meeting since they're both in different states.
Great start. Keep writing. :0)
Author's Response:
thanks! :) I have been out of the writing BSB fan fiction for six years...most of this story wil be based off of me but with a little BSB flare ;) I am soo glad you like it! :)
Date: 11/10/12 09:44 am Title: Prologue
My curiosity spot has be itched and I definitely wanna scratch it and find out how this story unfolds.
Keep writing :0)
