Date: 12/07/12 04:52 am Title: Chapter 6
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT. HOLY MOTHER......what......speechless
Date: 12/07/12 03:38 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh, wow!! What a twist!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 12/06/12 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh shit. I love the twist you put in there at the end, the buildup was very nice. I am wondering what the hell she was doing licking butter off him....although if it were me, I probably would have done the same thing ;) Nick has that effect on the ladies lmao. Also your writing has umpoved, you seem to have fixed the pov issue.
Date: 12/03/12 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well that was fast haha
Date: 12/01/12 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
Nice chapters. I tought they moved to fast but it was nice he found someone. Lets see what happes in the morning.
Date: 11/26/12 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
that was fast, he just lost Lauren geesh! I knew this was going to happen but I thought there'd be more foreplay and teasing and fighting lol
Date: 11/26/12 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
that was hilarious! trying to make a move with a bum knee, way to go Carter!
Date: 11/26/12 08:21 am Title: Chapter 5
Well that was a buttery mess... and I loved it! You guys are so dirty, doing it on the dinner table.
I knew Tammy couldn't resist the Carter charm.
So glad the old couple didn't come to dinner. They would have gotten an eye full and probably have heart attacks.
All this chapter needed was a bucket of popcorn... awesome. Can't wait for more! Keep it coming. :0)
Date: 11/26/12 08:09 am Title: Chapter 4
That so called physical therapist has got to go! She was a complete airhead, there was no one home. I don't know if she is gonna cut it especially if Nick wants to be mobile ever again. Get another therapist! Fast!
As for Tammy feeling Nick up. LOL. That didn't seem to go as planned. Definitely would get a qualified therapist Nicholas. I mean you wanna be able to Bom Chicka Wah Wah with Tammy soon, right?
Awesomeness equals this chapter. Going to read more. ;0)
Date: 11/25/12 05:10 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow, you sure move fast Carter.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 11/25/12 05:08 am Title: Chapter 4
Lmao. Yup, only Carter.
~Lenni~
Date: 11/25/12 04:24 am Title: Chapter 5
I really am enjoying the sexy butter scene but what threw me off was changing POVs partway through the chapter. Otherwise nice job ;)
Author's Response: Whoops, this writing thing is harder than I thought. >:)
Date: 11/25/12 04:07 am Title: Chapter 5
So hot. Amazing job. Can't wait for more.
