Date: 11/20/12 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm glad Nick made it to Maine ok.
As for Brian and Baylee, I hope they are ok. And that we eventually find out what the hell is up with Leighanne. *hint hint*
As for this Sarah chick, she seems like an ok person. I'm anxious to see how her character interacts with Nick during his stay.
Really loving this story. Can't wait to be able to read more. :0)
P.S. Btw, I don't write & share. I have personal experience with a friend who was charged with vehicular manslaughter. Maybe I'll tell you about it sometime.
Date: 11/20/12 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yeah he's allowed to move on ;) Go for it!
Date: 11/20/12 05:26 am Title: Chapter 3
Lmao. Only Carter.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 11/19/12 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
That place sounds lovely. Thinking of squeezing someone's arse when he's in pain, LOL, he has a one track mind!
Date: 11/19/12 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
Fantastic Chapter! I can't wait to read more. I am also interested in why Leighanne wanted to kill Lauren, my only guess is she was aiming for Nick.
Date: 11/19/12 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hahahaha. This is perfect, the last line is amazing and such a Nick thing to say. You sure you're not in his head or something? it's perfect. I'm curious to see what happens to Leighanne though. Can't wait for more :)
Date: 11/19/12 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
The image of Nick on a lobster boat is priceless! LOL
Date: 11/19/12 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ok, i was literally dying with laughter at this chapter! It was fantastic!
Date: 11/14/12 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
seems a little harsh to arrest her at the funeral but it adds some great drama to the story. It will be cool to see where that goes but the murder charge makes me wonder if she aimed the car at Nick and Lauren maybe trying to take out Nick instead of Lauren?
Author's Response: hmm you just have to keep reading and reviewing and loving my story to find out. Thanks!
Date: 11/13/12 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Arresting Leighanne at the funeral, wow, that's harsh! But maybe it was the only way they knew they'd get her? Maybe she was planning on doing a runner?
Great stuff!
Author's Response: Leighanne wouldn't do a runner. She doesn't like getting busy with anyone that's faster than her. HA!
Date: 11/12/12 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
The ending of this chapter was totally baffling!
I feel sorry for Nick, not only did he lose Lauren in the car accident, but he has to sit through the funeral thinking about what happened all over again.
I hope going to Maine will help Nick to cope with things.
I am very curious to find out why Leighanne is being charged with murder and not vehicular manslaughter.
Great chapter. Anxious to find out what's really going on. :0)
Author's Response: I'm not very good at police stuff. Do you write? Do you research junk for your stories? I should try that. Thanks!
Date: 11/12/12 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
If Leighanne hit the car that Nick and Lauren were in on purpose, that means she wanted Nick dead as well. It's going to be interesting to see what her motive is and if she's always had a grudge against Nick. Poor Brian and Baylee.
Author's Response: Leighanne has always had a grudge against me...I mean Nick. haha aren't I hilarious? Thanks for the review!
Date: 11/12/12 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Leighanne did what? omg......
Date: 11/12/12 06:35 am Title: Chapter 2
Ooooh. But c'mon! They arrest her during a funeral? Show a little fucking RESPECT there coppers!
UPDATE!!!!!
~Lenni~
