Date: 01/06/13 05:10 pm Title: Before: No Geishas
Oh dear God!
finally! She made a move!!!
Date: 01/06/13 04:52 am Title: After: The Moment That Changed This Story
*speechless* again..
more!!
im so proud of myself.i saw the update this morning, but decided to wait til tonight to read it.. update please?!
Date: 01/05/13 09:13 pm Title: After: The Moment That Changed This Story
Ahhh! I should have expected that, but ahhh I just want to yell at Nick and shake him. There's plastic surgery, Nicky! It'll be okay!
Please post more soon. I'm dying from suspense here.
Date: 01/05/13 01:57 pm Title: After: The Moment That Changed This Story
I do believe I called it... :P
Date: 01/05/13 08:40 am Title: After: The Moment That Changed This Story
OMG! SERIOUSLY! I just can't even form words right! I need more chapters!
Date: 01/04/13 05:17 pm Title: Before: Horny Rabbits
Wah, this is too good! I ran out of chapters to read D: I just love non-linear storytelling. It's like sitting at a table with a giant puzzle and watching the picture form. Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: Non-linear is a lot of fun to write, too. I really enjoy it. This particular time, the non-linear line happened by accident. I originally wrote just the "after" sequences as the full story, then I realized I really liked my backstory and I started writing the "before" sequences... Thus the nonlinear line was born. Usually if I write non-linear lines, I write two totally random scenes with no plan on how to connect the two... then the story is how those two scenes connect. I do a lot of writing that way, even when the story is seemingly linear. I'll write the end then back up and work to it. :) It helps me focus on tying the pieces together.
Date: 01/04/13 03:56 pm Title: Before: A Game of Clue
I'm zooming through this (and thoroughly enjoying it, by the way), but I just wanted to drop a comment because I loooooooved the Clue reference. So yeah, I'm reading; keep up the great work!!
Date: 01/03/13 09:42 pm Title: After: Oliver
Considering the warning says "Death", I'm not happy with where this is heading, Hannah...
Author's Response: But...are you enjoying the journey? That's the important part. ;)
Date: 01/03/13 08:08 pm Title: Before: Horny Rabbits
As hard as it must have been I'm glad she didn't give in :)
Author's Response: Agreed! I would've had to kick her ass if she gave in. Course, the story isn't over yet....
Date: 01/03/13 02:24 pm Title: Before: Horny Rabbits
*gulp*
brilliant!
Author's Response: Aw thank you! :)
Date: 01/03/13 07:52 am Title: Before: Nick's New Leaf
That was a wonderful chapter! I'm so hooked! I can't wait for more!
Date: 01/02/13 09:31 pm Title: Before: Taking Advantage
I am so hooked on this story!!!!! DON'T LET NICK DIE, HANNAH!!!!!!
Author's Response: You know Nick, he has a mind of his own... <3
Date: 01/02/13 06:22 pm Title: Before: Good Days and Great Lays
This must be what a crack addict feels like
:: shivers ::
I just need another chapter man!!
Author's Response: lmao I'll be conducting rehab for all my addicts once the story is over. Or maybe I'll just start a new story for y'all to transfer your addictions to. LOL
Date: 01/02/13 02:34 pm Title: Before: Good Days and Great Lays
I sometimes have a hard time dealing with the before and after chapters but that doesn't mean I don't like the story because I do like it! Keep the chapters coming...and don't let Nick die haha.
Author's Response: Is it confusing, the format? It's 1 After, 3 Befores... I know it's a weird way to set up the story, but there's a reason. :) I'm glad you like the story! Thanks for the feedback.
Date: 01/01/13 06:54 am Title: After: Be There
*speechless*
😮
Author's Response: :)
