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Reviewer: FiliKlepto Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/13 05:41 pm Title: Before: Shooting Practice

Heheheheh, sniper. But there goes my theory thats she accidentally shoots Nick while aiming for Chris.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/13 11:22 am Title: Before: Fight Firearms With Firearms

There you go. Damn technology. Hopefuly Chris didnt have the time to find them again.

Reviewer: FiliKlepto Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/13 08:30 am Title: Before: Fight Firearms With Firearms

OMG nice twist... The find my phone app, I never would've thought of that! Also, gun control laws in the U.S are ridiculous :/ I'm not against responsible gun ownership, but the ease of acquiring a firearm is just ridiculous, and I totally agree with Ashley that two guns are more dangerous than one.

Thanks for your detailed answer to my last question!

Reviewer: Tweetersweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/13 07:20 am Title: Before: Fight Firearms With Firearms

OHHHHHHH that makes sense (about the app) I was wondering how he did that.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/13 07:10 am Title: Before: Fight Firearms With Firearms

My theory seems to be coming more true by each update you post. I have a feeling i will be right. goddamn Chris....that fluffer nutter.

Reviewer: FiliKlepto Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/13 09:02 pm Title: Before: Leaving Boston

Awww, Ashley's last line made me really sad :( when you first came up with the idea for this series, did you imagine Chris was going to be so terrifying and evil?



Author's Response: Funny you should ask that. Originally Chris wasn't even IN the story. Then I added him in because Ashley needed somebody at the house to interact with and bring her attention to the news on TV. In the first outline of the story that did include Chris, he was use only as a catalyst to make Nick see how he felt. Even once Ashley was WITH Chris, he wasn't initially intended to be the monster he became. I chose to skew Chris when I wrote the intro to Landing and the idea that he and Nick had a fight came into play. Throughout the entirety of Landing, I built Chris's abusive personality brick by brick in a slow, subtle fashion so that the opening of Leave would be shocking, but still completely traceable through the stories. Chris's character was not, however, originally intended to be in Love. It wasn't until I got complaints that his arrest in Leave wasn't harsh enough that I decided to carry him over. I probably should've added one more story as Love is going to end up being longer than the other Nick & Dogface stories, but oh well! Live and Learn. ;)

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/13 02:56 pm Title: Before: Leaving Boston

Ugh I hate Chris!! Why can't the police just arrest him and throw him in jail like for forever....

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/13 11:55 am Title: Before: Leaving Boston

Damn Chris!! He's fluffing nuts. 

Reviewer: FiliKlepto Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/13 02:26 am Title: Before: Showtime

Jesus, Chris. Way to ruin thr moment...... Also, they DO have a restraining order, right?

Reviewer: FiliKlepto Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/13 02:11 am Title: Before: I Gots The Hots For Ya

I love that Ashley was terrible at phone sex haha!

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/13 11:17 pm Title: After: I'm Here

Damn, these chapters are breaking my heart!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/13 10:40 pm Title: After: I'm Here

This was so sad. I wish there was a way for him to talk to her....

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/13 06:08 pm Title: Before: Showtime

I want to kill Chris for ruining this moment lol. Seriously these last two chapters blew me away! Amazing.

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/13 05:26 pm Title: Before: Showtime

Mind guts...BWHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!  And damn you! Can't just let them have a little fun can you?!  Well, the did..but you certainly cut the afterglow off in a hurry!  Next chapter please!!!!!

Reviewer: Tweetersweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/13 05:11 pm Title: Before: Number 27

:: sigh ::

Oh to be Ashley right now...