Reviews For Crash and Burn
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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/13 10:44 pm Title: * You're Not Alone *

I loved your wonderful use of description in this story! It was easy to visualize the storm brewing outside as Brian sat at the window and brooded. You created the perfect atmosphere to set the scene and fit with Brian's emotional anguish. I wish I knew what he was so upset about, but I don't think that was the point of the story. I like how you captured the dark side of his personality. We are so used to seeing the side of him that's always smiling and clowning around, but he can't be like that all the time, and it makes sense that he would use the nonstop jokes and impressions as a defense mechanism to cover up his insecurities. I love how you described his emotions when Nick arrived, that struggle not to cry and, finally, the collapse into Nick's arms, as he let it all out. It's amazing what a hug can do for the soul. You really showed that in this story. I like that it ended on a positive note, too. Again, great job capturing such intense emotions in such a small, intimate moment!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! *__*

People usually stop in front of Brian's crazyness, jokes and smiles but that's one of the reason why I love writing about him: because the smile is only the top of the iceberg. And, I don't know, he screams angst to me, I love torture him! lol 

I didn't add the reason of his breakdown because, as you said, it wasn't the point of the story. I get that Brian is the kind of person that tend to hold in until he's full so it takes only one little things to break down. And Nick knows that, that's why he simplu hug him. *sigh* I love their friendship. *sigh*

Reviewer: rokstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/13 09:38 pm Title: * You're Not Alone *

Aww, I just loved this story - So heartbreaking AND heartwarming all at the same time. Seeing Brian so incredibly sad made me want to jump right into the story somehow and wrap him up in a big warm comforting hug. However, since that obviously is impossible, lol thank you Nick for doing it for me.
P.S Great job, hope you'll write more Brian stories.

Author's Response: Awww, thank you! And yes, I will def write more Brian stories. Brian deserves some love after all. lol

Reviewer: freedomwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/13 09:13 pm Title: * You're Not Alone *

awww, thanks for this, it's lovely! In a twisted, not making sense kind of way.

 



Author's Response: You're welcome. =)