Date: 03/07/13 04:40 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
yup as soon as Seth said there was an agent to help him disappear I KNEW it was Aiden!! See she WAS hiding something, just maybe not a bad guy after all? hrm... Seth is really suspicious to me now.
Date: 03/07/13 04:09 am Title: Chapter Twelve
I literally went "OH SHIT!" at the end of this chapter..lol Now I'm shocked Aiden AKA Brackett let him go so easily. This is gettin gooooooood!!! Lovin it so far!
Date: 03/07/13 01:30 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Roflmao. That is much too funny. I figured it would be Aiden. Don't know if I trust Seth too much. Why didn't he get out of town like he was supposed to? Something is fishy about all of this.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 03/06/13 10:35 am Title: Chapter Eleven
wait. I thought Seth has to RUN too? what the hell is he still doing in New York like his life is not in danger. He even answer his phone. I dont trust him one bit. Come on, Jared, dont tell Seth anything and run! You're better off on your own.
Date: 03/05/13 01:13 am Title: Chapter Eleven
I sure hope they do find her & that she's alive & well.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 03/04/13 09:14 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
hrm now I think Seth is behind part of it too! me and my suspicious mind... lol
Date: 03/04/13 05:45 pm Title: Chapter Ten
oh no that's not good. what's going to happen now... is he gonna find out what happened? he has to...
Date: 03/04/13 05:42 pm Title: Chapter Nine
oh no where is she what happened. I hope that blood is was from someone she attacked....yikes
Date: 03/04/13 05:38 pm Title: Chapter Eight
ugh grits. I am not sure I would have been able to even try them. Okay I HAVE tried them before, didn't much like them. She played it off that she was talking about the guys who took the kid but maybe she's in on it yes?
Date: 03/04/13 10:20 am Title: Chapter Ten
that was intense! but something was not right... if the guy in the closet was a bad guy, why is he hiding in the first place? he should have fired at Jared the moment he stepped into the house? Why did he wait for Jared to be in the bedroom and discover the spoon ring? I have a feeling that he's just scaring Jared away. That he's good with guns but intentionally firing around Jared. that he doesn't want Jared to be shot. And if the blood was Emma's, and she was really dead. How the hell can she put the spoon ring in the safe? Ugh! Hannah, please update soon and don't make me overanalyze things. lol
Date: 03/03/13 08:47 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Good God. He should've listened to me & called the cops. He should've called her precinct & told them what had happened instead of returning home to find her. He's such a dumbass. I get that he's worried, but c'mon. Use a little common sense! If she tells you not to go back, don't go back. If the place is ransacked, don't go in, call the cops!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 03/03/13 10:15 am Title: Chapter Nine
Oh my! Please tell me there'd be a new update today! You cant just leave it like this. Is the spoon handle ring the thing that if Emma let go meant she's dead? Poor Jared. If I was him, I wouldn't be able to go to the bedroom. I would have ran away immediately after opening the door and see the mess inside the house. Cant wait for the next update.
PS. Is aiden gone for good? lol
Date: 03/03/13 08:59 am Title: Chapter Nine
You dumbass, she told you not to come home. Call the damn cops - which is what you should've done the moment you saw the place had been ransacked. You're damn lucky the person wasn't still in there when you entered! You could be killed! God, think with your damn head for a moment and not your heart! Jeez!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 03/03/13 06:00 am Title: Chapter Eight
I don't know why, but I don't trust Aiden. I think she's just trying to figure out what he knows and whether or not he too needs to be killed off.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
