Date: 03/02/13 10:21 am Title: Chapter Seven
Oh, Jared, didn't Emma teach you not to trust anyone especially when you are in a deep shit like this? You might know what really happened and what you are running away from, but be careful, man. She might be a friend or an enemy.
Date: 03/02/13 10:18 am Title: Chapter Five
Now, here's the part that you said you explained Jared's lack of chivalry. And guess what?, I loved him more. lol
Date: 03/02/13 10:17 am Title: Chapter Four
I hate it when all you want to do is keep quiet and think, then there's a talkative person next to you. I dont know why but this Aiden girl is annoys me. lol
Date: 03/02/13 07:02 am Title: Chapter Seven
Oh, God. I hope she's not with them bad guys.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 03/01/13 04:36 pm Title: Chapter Six
I hope she calls. I hope no one is checking her phone to find out where he is.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 02/28/13 10:30 pm Title: Chapter Six
hrm ... I'm worried about Emma. What could have happened to her. maybe I shouldn't be suspicious of Aiden but I read too many mystery books not to suspect EVERYONE at some point.
Date: 02/28/13 09:54 pm Title: Chapter Five
LOL. I wonder what Aiden is up to. Is she really just a nice person or is she involved in this entire situation and keeping tabs on the police lady's husband? hrm interesting...
Date: 02/28/13 07:26 pm Title: Chapter Five
Oye vey in a half shell. I hope everything works out alright.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 02/28/13 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oye vey. I bet those goonds nabbed her. Damn.
~Lenni~
Date: 02/28/13 04:53 pm Title: Chapter Four
I love how you have BSB in the story! LOL... funny stuff. I wonder if Emma went a separate way to keep him safer or if she got caught by the ruffians and is now in trouble. *bites nails*
Date: 02/27/13 10:13 pm Title: Chapter Three
oooh what is going on. I am defintely invested and need to know what is going on and how these guys link to the boy and what they discovered.
Date: 02/27/13 06:19 pm Title: Chapter Three
Oh, shit. Why ain't nobody helping them? I bet they murdered Seth. That, or he was apart of it. Oye vey.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 02/27/13 06:16 pm Title: Chapter Two
Oh, wow. What, did the mob take the kid?
~Lenni~
Date: 02/27/13 04:40 pm Title: Chapter Two
what did she stumble on to I wonder...
Date: 02/27/13 03:38 pm Title: Chapter Three
It's 6:34 pm and I should be going home but instead I stayed for a while to read the 2nd update of the day. I love Jared. He's not like 'I-m the man and I should protect you', Emma told him to run so he ran. I guess, Emma won't be able to board the plane. And Jared would be on his own wondering where the hell should he go. I love this story. I can't wait for more. I don't care if AJ or the other guys aren't in this story. This is a good one. :)
Author's Response: I've kind of explained Jared and his lack of "chivalry" in the chapters following this comment but I figured I'd follow up and say that Jared's lack of ballsiness is kind of why I'm loving writing him. LOL
