Date: 03/28/13 07:53 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Yankee
Her dad is too funny, the yankee conversation was the funny thing I have ever read. Nick needs to tell her truth THe longer he continues to lie , the worst her reaction will be when she finds out that he is not really Nate. She is already hurt enough this going be worst. I see a trainwreak coming
Date: 03/28/13 07:13 am Title: Chapter Seventeen: Molly's The Yellow One
OMG!!! You are a fricking genius!! I absolutely loved it and Bradley!
Date: 03/27/13 02:06 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Nice Meeting You, Bill
I am in love with this story . I can't want to see where this is going. Extra points for the "To kill a Mocking bird" reference. Suddenly I want a Great Dane that I can name Scooby Doo.
Date: 03/27/13 07:18 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: I Get That A Lot
PUPPY! I hope this is friendly.
Date: 03/27/13 05:48 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Nice Meeting You, Bill
Well Bill maybe Scooby smells the skank ya had on you.
I'm so curious as were you're heading with all this. More!!
Date: 03/27/13 05:30 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: I Get That A Lot
Busted. And lol at Ricky snapping his fingers sand saying he has friends that work out. That whole paragraph cracked me up.
It just keeps getting worse for this girl. :(
Date: 03/27/13 04:29 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Pictures
Oh this is not good Carter... The story however is fantastic and I can't wait to read more. :)
Date: 03/27/13 12:00 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Pictures
I have to agree with Rachel - I've been wondering the whole time if Chris is full of crap...there's no way for either of them to prove it...I hope things don't get screwed up with Becky - I like her!
Date: 03/26/13 11:12 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Pictures
I hope you get busted Nickolas. Lol I also think that Chris is pulling his chain. Probably hasn't gone out with a single chick.
Author's Response: I think this is my favorite plot twist guess that I've received on this story so far, LOL. Awesome!
Date: 03/26/13 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Like A Virgin
Ah I seriously love this!
Date: 03/26/13 08:56 pm Title: Prologue: A Stupid Bet with Chris
Poor Becky....I can relate. I didn't get kissed until I was 20. I'm still a virgin as well....that really hit home for me. I hace a feeling she might know who Nick is but uf she finds out he's been lying, i think someone's heart will be broken :(
Date: 03/26/13 06:13 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Like A Virgin
Damnit Nick. You're going to break her heart and yours right along with it! Men.
Date: 03/26/13 06:04 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Like A Virgin
Oh hell. This chapter made me cry 'cause everything that Becky said hits close to home. I can see Nick's behaviour changing throughout this chapter even though it's just a little bit.
Date: 03/26/13 04:01 pm Title: Chapter Twelve: Dirty Secret
I know how you feel Becky, didn't go through those extremes but I know how you feel.
Plus she doesn't believe you Nickolas because she knows you're a BSB and you lied. That's why she asked you to spill your dirty secret.
Still negative points for being a blockhead. :p
Date: 03/26/13 01:46 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Ectoplasm-Green
Negative points for being a blockhead. LOTS OF NEGATIVE POINTS!!!
and I think she's yanking his chain. She knows who he is.
NEGATIVE POINTS!!!
