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Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/14 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 12

I also dislike surprises. Ugh!

This chapter was so quick that it could have probably been added to the end of the last one. However, I can see why you set it apart as you are creating interest with AJ's surprise. It also means that I have time to read one more chapter. :)

Author's Response: It depends on the surprise with me. I've met all the guys at a meet and greet and it was very overwhelming so I understand how she feels. Sometimes I have trouble with getting enough detail in and it makes it almost like a mini chapter.

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/13 12:44 am Title: Chapter 12

really?! you end it there???? Don't keep me hanging for too long now. Can't wait for more.