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Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/14 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 15

That was the fastest acting drug I've ever heard of! - LOL

I'm liking the fact that you have turned Michelle into the villain. it will definitely introduce some intensity into the story.

This chapter could have been hyped up with a little more description. It would have been nice to know a little bit more about what was going on in AJ's mind as the drug started to take hold of his body.

Author's Response: It was a quick one! LOL Michelle is a prize and she wants to make AJ's life as miserable as possible. I agree with you that it needed more detail and I should have done more research for it. My bad on that one!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/13 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 15

WTF?!?!?!?!?!?!? What are you doing?!?!?! NO NO NO!!



Author's Response:

I thought you might have this reaction!