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Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/14 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 16

Poor AJ. Things are going to get worse for him before they get better. I like how you've twisted things around with Michelle taking advantage of AJ. Sadly, it's usually the other way around; the guy takes advantage of the girl.

Author's Response: You're right about it usually being the other way around. It was important to show the vulnerable part of AJ and to have him question things.

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/13 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 16

OH god!!! Can't believe this!!! Update!