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Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/14 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 36

Sometimes I feel as though I'm reading a script because your writing is so dialogue heavy. Don't take that comment in a bad way, though. It allows me to come to my own conclusions about what the characters are thinking (which I'm enjoying). After reading this story and reading your work on the most recent page (I haven't forgotten about that story by the way ... but if I read two AJ stories at the same time, I will get them confused - LOL), I can see the improvement especially in terms of detail and description. :)

Author's Response: I completely agree with you! I've run into the problem that I can see how the story plays out in my mind and when I write it, I tend to forget that everyone else can't see what's in my mind! LOL I'm glad that you started reading the recent one and I'm hoping that you find it to be more detailed and complete than my older ones.