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Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/14 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 9

She's a teacher right and makes a teacher's salary?? How can she afford such a lovely sounding house? LOL I'm not American, so sometimes I forget that housing prices in the states are often fairly cheap.

Of course Nick would have a laundry list of items for her to pick up. *rolls eyes*

Author's Response: She is a teacher and I took some literary license with the kind of house she has. I couldn't afford her house even working the extra jobs I had but I figured I could give her a bonus! LOL Yes, Nick seems to have one thing on his mind and it's not helping AJ and Kat get any closer!

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/14 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 8

These chapters are so short (not in a bad way) that I feel as though I'm just racing through this story. LOL - You're going to log on and be like: "why do I have so many reviews ... what is this girl doing?!? - HAHA

Anyways, I'm glad that it looks as though the Kat/AJ relationship is heating up. :)

Author's Response: I know, they're really short. It's actually something I'm trying to work on in future stories. I think I did a better job in the sequel as far as adding more detail. And keep the reviews coming, even if there's 15 in a day; I appreciate and can use all of the feedback! Hopefully it will keep going in that direction!

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/14 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 7

Well, I'm glad that AJ finally manned-up and apologized. He needs to cut all of his ties with whatever his current girlfriend's name is and move on to Kat. *tee hee*

Author's Response: It seems like he's finally turned the corner and maybe with Kat's help, he can open up and move. I think Kat is a much better fit for him anyway!

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/14 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 6

The huge family dinner totally reminds me of my family. I think there's usually upwards of 35 of us for Christmas dinner; including two sets of twins under the age of 5. It's insanity!

Loved that AJ ended up tackling Kat instead of Nick. Things are about to get interesting ....

Author's Response: My dad's family is huge and we always have big holiday functions. I had to add the part about the tackling because it is a real family tradition to play these games and for people to get hurt! LOL It was actually my cousin who almost tackled me through the fence during one such event!

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/14 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 5

AJ being a grump is starting to annoy me. He better snap out of this funk and fast. Although, I'm pretty sure that Kat will be able to help him with that. :P

Out of curiosity, what grade do you teach? Based on this story, I'm going to guess Middle School range? Perhaps 7 or 8?

Author's Response: He is getting rather obnoxious with the refusing to make the best out of a situation and Kat may need to force the issue with him! Good guess! :-) I teach 8th grade math in an urban middle school but I used to teach 7th in the same school.

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/14 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 4

They're going to sit in on her class?? OMG that would be the worst teaching period of my life! In terms of the fact that I would be so distracted that the kids would learn nothing. Bahahaha

I enjoyed Nick's comment about being in the Principal's office and not being in trouble. I have a feeling that was probably pretty accurate for him growing up ... for the short time that he was in formal school anyways.

Author's Response: I'm not sure I could even manage to teach, I'd be too busy staring at them! LOL I could see Nick being kind of a class clown and winding up getting spoken to about it. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and that you picked it for the reading challenge!

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/14 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

If those kids were in my class, they would have been out the door during any kind of break time. Those are the moments that I cherish everyday ... although I'm clearly not as dedicated as Kat is. :)

I love how her Principal was just like: "Yeah, sort yourself out and then come and find me" - LOL

Author's Response: Teachers need those breaks! I wrote the piece about her principal because I could see my associate principal doing that to me!

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/14 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

They should actually have that contest! Although, if the guys were to show up at my work I would probably die from excitement and embarrassment all at the same time. :P

AJ is pretty "grump-tastic" at the moment. I have a feeling that will change once he meets Kat.

Author's Response: I really wish they would! I agree with you completely that if they showed up at my school, I might become a mute! He is one grumpy guy and is taking it out on everyone around him. Maybe Kat can change his mood a little!

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/14 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay! I'm starting the second half of the reading challenge. Right off the bat, I like the fact that Kat and Brenda are teachers. I can totally relate! LOL

Author's Response: I'm a teacher and I thought it was something that I could definitely capture! I hope you enjoy the whole story!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/13 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 9

Nick's a bit demanding isn't he! I would've told him to shove his list lol

Author's Response: Thanks Carter-Orange for checking out my story and reviewing! I hope you like the rest of it!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/13 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

How embarrassing for her LOL

Author's Response: It really is!

Reviewer: Hazel_85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/13 04:15 am Title: Chapter 54

DAMN!! : / READING ON : )
Thank you again for sharing your stories with us!!!! : )

Reviewer: Hazel_85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/13 04:12 am Title: Chapter 53

Aww crap!

Reviewer: JordansLady Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/13 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 54

man she left him ..

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/13 01:28 am Title: Chapter 54

Wow that's really sad. Guess Denise won this time.



Author's Response:

You never know! I posted the first chapter of the sequel. I know you were disappointed about it not moving fast enough but I hope you like the second one.