Date: 06/13/13 12:17 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven
Not totally convinced he's being honest. When you spend that much time being dishonest it's like second nature. I hope for Sam's sake he really is playing by the rules. Great chapter!
Date: 06/13/13 12:13 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Six
Something is not right here, I just don't what it is!
Date: 06/12/13 01:54 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven
Nick is up to a lot more than he is letting on. He might be telling the truth about Cora but his actions say another thing. Plus I agree with the other reviewer that said Nick paid someone off.
Date: 06/12/13 05:45 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Six
Nick is paying this guy to whack stuff, but I'm pretty sure it ain't weeds...
Date: 06/12/13 05:36 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Six
Something is really not right. The gardener acting a bit funny....Nick acting a bit funny....something is up. I am really curious to see what happens now!!!
Date: 06/12/13 04:32 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Six
he paid a gardner with a huge wad of cash? and the way he said of course not. lol he does Nick's real dirty work!
Author's Response: Uhoh I hear suspicions rising...lol
Date: 06/12/13 01:09 am Title: Prologue Part III
What the?!??!?!?
Author's Response: My my my that's a lot of exclamation and question marks... LOL
Date: 06/12/13 12:59 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four
Oh it so does mean something!
Date: 06/12/13 12:55 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Something just not right here!
Date: 06/11/13 05:14 pm Title: Prologue Part III
Just got caught up....damn girl you got one hell of a story. I am so enthralled in this....I really love how realistic the characters are. Plus now there is a little mystery going. personally at this point I have no guesses but I'm enjoying the ride, great job Hannah.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Gotta love some suspense. ;) I think inputting realism into a character is really important to keeping a story realistic in general. It's certainly what keeps Fan Fiction from being drab... A story loses all dimensionality the moment the characters become unbelievable...
Date: 06/11/13 05:08 pm Title: Prologue Part III
What!!!? This story seriously has me on the edge! Did nick do it?! I'm shocked he didn't say Cora's name when he was with Sam
Author's Response: ROSS SAID RACHEL! lol...Sorry, that's totally what goes through my head whenever someone mentions a guy saying the wrong name.
Date: 06/11/13 08:48 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four
I think he is lying and that she needs to ask him to see his shirt; like he go get it and she go with him to get it. something just doesn't seem right.
Author's Response: Doesn't seem right at all...
Date: 06/10/13 10:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Hugh's a jackass! Really? Discussing a murder at poor Z's funeral?
Author's Response: Poor Z... Course I think everyone there was probably discussing it... probably casting shifty eyes on all those rumored to have done it too!
Date: 06/10/13 09:24 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One
That's awful!
Author's Response: Poor Z!
Date: 06/10/13 06:01 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
uh oh! another twist. he so didn't kill himself! maybe she'll get to use some monking after all :)
Author's Response: Perhaps! Monking with Nick sounds fun. bahaha :)
