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Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/13 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 17

What a bitch! I hope Nick sees it before it's too late!

Author's Response: Hey Kryie :) Loving your story. Sorry it has taken me so long to get back and and to review your stories. Work has been kicking my ass lately. Summer months are always hectic. Lauren isn't the best version of herself right now thats for sure. Hopefully nick opens his eyes and sees Sophia. Much Love, Rosalie

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/13 06:03 pm Title: Thirty Days to Soon

Poor Sophia, Nick should have figured his issues out before involving her.

Reviewer: lovelace028 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/13 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 17

Lauren that bitch I want to know who was she talking to on the phone. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review working on the next chapter. Who do you think she was talking to on the phone...You will find out soon!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/13 12:12 am Title: Thirty Days to Soon

ooh Lauren is such a B!!!! Poor Sophia. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hey Hun :) Thank you so much for your review. Yes, Sophia is having a rough go. Really, though I don't think either of them expected it to be easy. I am very happy you are still enjoying the story! Update your story soon!! :) Much Love, Rosalie

Reviewer: Hazel_85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/13 04:20 am Title: Thirty Days to Soon

It took me a hot minute to get through all the chapters but I finally did! This story has had me on the edge of my seat this last chapter especially with the wifey & girlfriend drama. I am team sophia, once a cheater always no.take backs. Nick has every right to not take her back after the lies. That's just me can't wait for the next chapter & thanks for sharing! Have a great weekend!! : )

Author's Response: Hi Hazel :) I am so happy that I have a new reader and reviewer. I am so happy that you are enjoying my story especially with the character that I built in Sophia. I am glad that I was able to keep you reading from chapter to chapter. Yes there are lies...who else do you think is lying? There may be more that floats to the surface. Keep reading and you will see. ;) Thank you so much for your review. Reviews mean so very much to me it lets me know what my readers are enjoying and not enjoying in the story!! Look forward to keeping you on the edge of your seat. Much Love, Rosalie

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/13 02:00 am Title: Day Seven

Good for Sophia standing up for herself!



Author's Response: Hi Kyrie, Im glad that you like it. Sophia is getting a bigger backbone and is starting to step out of her shell, your cameo appearance will be in the next few chapters. What is your favorite thing to do with your friends? ( for part of the story) Can't be go to a BSB concert *lol*

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/13 02:46 am Title: Day Seven

Wow things definitely got interesting with Lauren showing up! looking forward to the next chapter and you've done great with proofing before posting :D Keep it up!



Author's Response: Hello, (What is your real name?) I am so happy that you are liking the story. Yes, things are starting to heat up between Nick and Sophia. What is he going to do now that Lauren is back in the picture. Things are about to get verrrryy interesting. Thank you for reading and reviewing it means a lot to me. Rosalie

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/13 10:16 pm Title: Day One

Great job! Gotta love Nick!



Author's Response: I am so happy you are liking the story and I appreciate every time, you take the time to review and give your input it makes me feel great about myself. Yes, Nick is Nick! ;)can't wait until you update your story.. Rosalie

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/13 02:44 am Title: Thirty Days

I think the story line is good so far. Big advice is to proofread what you've written so that your grammar and punctuation are good. I was confused a couple of times due to a lack of punctuation. Looking forward to the next chapter :) 



Author's Response:

Hey Hun :)

Thanks for reading!!! and most of all letting me know what you think.  I know my grammar sucks but thats for one of two reasons I suck grammar *loL* #2 I have a really hard time posting on this site when I write it in word. So then after I write it I have to rewrite it. By that time I am so fustrated and can't proof read it because everytime I proofread it it blocks me and gives me an error message. I lose everything I have written thus far. I know it is my biggest flaw...trust me I know. :) I really hope you will still contiune to read, I will definately work on the proof reading... 

PS: I am glad that you like the story line though....its going to get interesting so keep reading. Thanks again for taking the time to review it means so very much to me. Also, really diggin your story.

Much Love,

Rosalie

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/13 06:16 pm Title: Thirty Days

Love this chapter! I'm rooting for Nick and Sophia to make it work. Hopefully, Nick will leave Lauren and he and Sophia can focus on their relationship.



Author's Response:

Hey Kyrie...

I think anybody can work out their differences as long as equal effort is put forth...the question is can Nick really give up on his marriage so easily....Also, I made a banner for the story so you can see Sophia. Sophia is actually Sophia Bush. *lol* I am going to something with this story, that I haven't seen anyone do and since you are my #1 fan your the first to know.

Much Love

Rosalie

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/13 06:33 pm Title: A Penny for Your Thoughts

This is one of the best chapters, writing wise and what's going on. Hope Nick and Sophia can come to some sense of peace with what happened and help each other.



Author's Response:

Hi :)

Thank you so much for your review, and I am so happy that you liking the story. I think things are going to get interesting ;) Thats all I can say, dont want to give away to much. Also, look for your name in the story I am giving you a small part in the next couple of chapters.

PS: Your stoy is AMAZING!

Much Love,

Rosalie

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/13 10:36 pm Title: Flashing lights

Nick and Sophia - they both need someone to love that loves them in return



Author's Response:

Good Im glad that that is the couple you are routing for. Don't get me wrong in real life I wish nothing but happiness for Nick and Lauren, but in story land im glad you are liking the couple. They both need love, thats what makes the world go round. Will have to keep reading to see how this all plays out. Sophia doesn't forget easily. :p

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/13 11:50 pm Title: Stalkers

Wow, that's a lot to absorb. Hopefully they can work things out.



Author's Response:

Yes it is a lot to process they both have a lot of drama going on. Sorry for the conjumbled of the words. it wouldn't let me post without it for some reason. Maybe, I don't know computers very well. *lol* Im sure in time things will happen for the right reasons. :) Who are you rooting for? Nick and Sophia, or Nick and Lauren?

 

Reviewer: Kaos_Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/13 05:37 pm Title: Messy Situations

OO boy does nick know how to get himself n  Messes! Love that th guys came after him and glad that they didnt do anything they would regret well atleast not as bad as it could've been! Poor nick lauren sucks... I think they would be cute together! ava is such a nice touch to why nick wants kids! Great chapter!!! Update soon! Can't wait to see how it all plays out! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review and putting up with my lack of updates...Im horrible ;) Yes they were good to a certian extent. Yea Nick really wants what his Brothers have he is finally ready and its just really, really messy right now.

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/13 02:17 am Title: Messy Situations

Glad he has the boys to lean on. Hope Sophia has someone too! Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I an glad you like the chapter. Sophia is tough, you don't have to worry about her. Im sure she has a bigger support system then we know ;)