Date: 09/18/14 01:10 am Title: Chapter 4
This was hot ! *thumbs up* So much passion in that scene between them two. How they were only controlled by instinct and emotions. Wild and sweet at the same time. You did an incredible job capturing those feelings in your words. And you did all that without getting into the Smut. And that is what I like.
I even like the curtain you put at the end of the scene, simply because of that... since you already put those raw emotions into words so well.
Kudos from me... You really have the talent to be a great author. Your stories are some of the best I read in all fandoms I've been part of.
Author's Response: *wipe away a tear* Thank you so much! <3 It's really a huge compliment and I'm really humbled by it. Not to mention that I'll be smiling all day thanks to you. *__*
I don't like writing smut. I love reading it but writing... I simply can't. I love describing the emotions, the feels and the connection in that kind of scenes. I mean, sometimes I try to do it but then... lol, it always end up with something more spiritual and full of emotions instead than pure smut. lol Glad that you like it this way. =)
Date: 09/18/14 12:58 am Title: Chapter 3
I wonder what time period that is written in? Since if I understood it right it was before Nicks first solo album?
All the feels in this story.... they are so much. You make them both seem so realistic... that Leighanne part in particular.
I'm suddenly hungry for lasagna tho ;)
Author's Response: I didn't have a particular time period in mind. It depends on the story and what I'm writing about.
Thanks for the feels part. It's what I always try to convey 'cause I love all the psychologic stuff and let people see why the characters act in a certain way.
Lasagna is the best! ;)
Thanks again!
Date: 09/18/14 12:48 am Title: Chapter 2
I love how we seem to have similar ideas about how at least Brians minds is working. It's so sweet to read this.
What I liked most about this chapter was Nick getting lost in Brians eyes, you wrote that perfectly. Can feel that attraction and tension. And I love it... it's buzzing in the air..
Why do I think the guys having keys and codes to Brians place will be of importance later in the story? :D well I'll read on curious how it will continue.
Author's Response: For the keys and codes, no, it won't be that important in the story. It was just a small detail.
Sometimes I truly believe I'm the only one who gets how Brian's mind works. It's so great to find someone else too, at least I can stop thinking I'm weird or not normal. lol
Thanks!
Date: 09/18/14 12:35 am Title: Chapter 1
xD I had to laugh at that fight... I could envision it. The type of girl Amanda seems to be in my mind... had a perfect picture.
I really laughed at the cooking bit too, since in my Sims 4 game.... where Nick and Brian live under one roof with AJ, Howie and Kevin... it's always Brian who is cooking the meals :D ... he's pretty good at it!
It also was so cute when the first person Nick thought about fleeing to after fighting was Brian. Of course it was to be expected but it's still cute :3
Author's Response: lol
It was actually fun to write that fight. Maybe it really happened, who knows? lol
Brian's cooking, one of the thousand reasons why I love this man. *__* Is there anything he can't do? Probably not, that's why Nick loves him so much.
And yes, they're the cutest!
Date: 06/20/13 01:38 am Title: Chapter 3
Totally cute! Love it! Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response:
Yay, they're totally cute! ^_^
Thanks for reading and reviewing! ^__^
Date: 06/18/13 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
Those two are so cute! Perfect couple! Can't wait For more!
Author's Response:
Yes, they are the cutest! And yet they still have to realizehow perfect they are to each other! lol
Thanks for reading and reviewing! ^__^
Date: 06/18/13 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
Those two are so cute! Perfect couple! Can't wait For more!
Date: 06/17/13 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
sounds like its gonna be great! can't wait to read more !
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! =)
Next chap is gonna be tomorrow. ^__^
