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Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/13 10:28 am Title: The Beginning

Hey Mare, I was supposed to read Four Santas Too Many for the reading challenge, but this story got my attention. I think, I'll finish this first. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, Ritz! Welcome back!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/13 08:19 pm Title: The Beginning

Yay for a Mare romance! Reading on....



Author's Response:

Woot! lol

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/13 06:17 am Title: The Beginning

Great start!

~Lenni~



Author's Response:

Thanks, Lenni!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/13 01:00 am Title: The Beginning

I am so happy to see you writing that I don't care it is romance....by the way the story does not say "complete" on it, i figured I'd let you know. This was really good for a beginning, loved how he was so shy with her but bold enough to ask her out without finding out anything about her first. Very Nick-like.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Tracy. I'll go fix that.

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/13 11:29 pm Title: The Beginning

LMAO! I knew she wasn't going to bite it in the cafe because she's alive as Nick's telling this story to Skylar, but that doesn't mean she won't drop dead of a brain aneurysm or something in the last paragraph. 0:)

Author's Response:

Well, it IS me lol

Reviewer: JordansLady Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/13 11:12 pm Title: The Beginning

aww love this so far..cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Thanks! More has arrived! lol

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/13 11:05 pm Title: The Beginning

Wow, Mare and romance, I never thought I'd see that!!

Sweet story so far though and I'm looking forward to hearing about the coffee shop too.  



Author's Response:

I know! Weird huh? lol

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/13 11:05 pm Title: The Beginning

Wow, Mare, color me amazed! This is really cute! It feels so different from your usual stuff, not just because of the genre, but even your writing style seems different. There's more physical description than descriptions of the setting and so on. I guess that's what happens when you write romance, since it's so focused on the characters. It's great, though. I love how you're writing it as a story within a story, set in the context of Nick telling his daughter a bedtime story. That's very cute. I got to the bottom of this chapter and was disappointed when I realized the second one isn't posted yet; I wanted to find out what happened at the coffee shop LOL.

Author's Response:

LOL I'm going to post part two in a minute. :O)

 

I did find myself having to change my style just a bit to go with the genre since romance does tend to rely a lot more on description than anything else. Thanks, Julie!