Date: 06/25/13 10:31 am Title: The Middle
For someone who writes excellent suspense stories, this is a good try at romance.:)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I thought I'd give it a go so I could at least say I tried!
Date: 06/23/13 08:22 pm Title: The Middle
I like the "dancing with Daddy" scene. Reminds me of my own dad.
Author's Response:
aww that's really sweet! I'm glad to know there are daddy's who dance with their little girls. Cute!
Date: 06/23/13 06:18 am Title: The Middle
Aww. I love when he dances with them. :)
~Lenni~
Author's Response:
Glad you enjjoyed that part, thanks Lenni!
Date: 06/23/13 01:03 am Title: The Middle
this is so sweet, loved the little details and Nick dancing with his daughter. You do a great job with the emotions and feelings of a romance story.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad to hear. :O)
Date: 06/22/13 11:50 pm Title: The Middle
Wow - if I hadn't seen your name on this I never would have believed you'd written it. It's brilliantly written, but quite a change from your usual style! Gone is your signature rolling dialogue though the description is great and quite vivid. Why must you be good at everything? :P
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks! It was hard staying away from my usual dialogue driven ways for this, equally hard to keep my female alive and kicking lol Thanks for reading and the very nice compliments! I feels all special now! :O)
Date: 06/22/13 11:29 pm Title: The Middle
Really enjoying it. I like that she has her standards when it comes to men, and if they don't meet them, then they are shown the door. Good for her! But I'm glad she heard the music when she danced with Nick :)
Author's Response:
I based her on one of my best friends who is exactly like Shauna in every way, even down t her name...Shauna lmao Thanks, Steph!
Date: 06/22/13 11:22 pm Title: The Middle
Awww! I like that their date started out so awkward and then eased into deeper conversation and eventually dancing LOL. I have to say, the dancing was a little cliche, but I still got goosebumps at this line: "They began to sway to the music that only she could hear and at that moment, 2:07 am, in a small coffee place in the middle of North Jersey, he knew he had met the woman he was going to marry." And the end, when he was dancing with Skylar, almost made me teary-eyed. I'm a sucker for the sappy stuff! So cute!! Post the ending! :)
Author's Response:
LOL I knew I was going over the top cliche with that part. I don't have an ending to post yet, but when I do, I will! I promise. You know she almost bought it in the cafe, right? How easy it would have been to have someone come in and rob the place at gun point. She would get shot in the head, Nick runs for his life and the guys have to resciue him.... Gah! Sunhine and rainbows...sunshine and rainbows....
