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Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/13 05:27 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Everything Kelsey Wanted

aaw I miss Kelsey already...

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/13 01:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight: A Good Friend

Awww...you used the photo in the banner! So bittersweet...

Author's Response: When I originally did my outline for this story, it started with this scene of him picking up the photo. Originally, everything prior to this point was backstory told in flashbacks throughout the remaining portion of the story. Somewhere in the time between when I originally outlined and the beginning of writing, I decided that I wanted to tell this part with Kelsey and use her death as the big twist. That's why the photograph was in the banner, 'cos it originally started with it! lol

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/13 02:29 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six: The Unstable Art of Moving On

This is one big horrible dream/nightmare right? ...you have me crying over here :(

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/13 07:48 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six: The Unstable Art of Moving On

That was so freakin sad. Wow that is a big deal for Des to do that.

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/13 08:16 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four: The Big Twist

shes gonna wake up with memory loss of Desi and stay with NIck!?

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/13 04:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: There's Been an Accident

Wow! Interested to see what happens with Nick and Desi now.

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/13 01:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: There's Been an Accident

Murderer.

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/13 12:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four: The Big Twist

What....ugh...

(Yes, that is my whole review lol)

Reviewer: Tweetersweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/13 11:56 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four: The Big Twist

I second what cherylll01 says.... Uh oh

Reviewer: cherylll01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/13 04:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four: The Big Twist

Uh oh.

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/13 03:38 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: The Hallelujah Chorus

dang!!

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/13 12:21 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: In The Eye

Glad Nick came clean to Kelsey but now he has to come clean to the guys, I can see why he would dread this moment. He says the guys are batshit crazy, well Kevin might just go batshit crazy on Nick when he confesses.
Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/13 11:20 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: In The Eye

Bahaha amazing!

Weird, my whole review didn't go through. I wonder what's going to happen, whether Nick will man up and tell the truth. I'm definitely not #TeamDesi though. Just because he's had feelings for her longer, doesn't mean Nick's mean less, it also doesn't give him first grab at the girl - it's about who she wants, not who saw her first! *steps off soapbox*

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/13 05:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Batshit Crazy

aawh I love it, love it!
I'm still team Nick but kinda feel bad for Desi still hihi.

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/13 01:29 am Title: Chapter Twenty: You Blind Girl

dang can't believe he finally told her. Shes gonna end up with Des huh ? I dont know which one I like for her.

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