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Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/14 12:57 am Title: Chapter One

Okay guys.....it's been a year. Time for an update!!!!

Love ya,
Pammy

Reviewer: lmalg Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/13 02:25 am Title: Chapter 3

Thank you both for the wonderful update. There is so much of J in this story, it's like spending time with him again when I read it. I love reading about Nick and Kevin's day to day lives but I'm also curious about what's going on with Nick's dad. It has to be something good.

Reviewer: luckystarre Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/20/13 03:07 am Title: Chapter 3

Thank you so much for posting an update. It seems like Nick has missed out on a lot. And what are Howie and Kevin hiding from Nick about his dad? Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: lmalg Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/13 07:28 am Title: Chapter Two

Thank you for the wonderful update. It's very intriguing to see how this is progressing. Why did Kevin freeze just because Nick leaned his head on Kevin's shoulder? Why doesn't Nick seem to be happy that he's home? I'm looking forward to what the rest of the story will bring. Hopefully we'll see chapter 3 soon. Yes I'm greedy. Btw great name for the restaurant. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing Linda. Glad you're enjoying the story and hope you continue to do so. All I can say is that after being so private about their relationship, to suddenly be a couple in front of people can be a bit startling for the both of them.

Reviewer: luckystarre Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/13 06:59 am Title: Chapter Two

THANK YOU for the update! I really like this story and love how you are developing the characters. Kevin and Nick's relationship seems complicated, and I can't wait to find out more.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Glad you're enjoying the story and hope you continue to do so.

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/13 02:56 am Title: Chapter Two

First, yeah, for an update! Secondly, I'm glad we got some Nick and Corey bonding! "They were both aware of Nick avoiding mentioning anything about being happy he’s home." Is Nick a little anxious about being home after his miscarriage? I really want to learn more about the relationship between Kevin and Jerald. Jerald seems to coddle Nick; but with Kevin, he seems tougher. And speaking of relationships with dads, will we get Nick and his dad next update? One of the reasons I love your stuff is the simple "day in the life" aspect you add. Thanks for that....it makes the characters more approachable, I guess is the word.

Again, thanks for sharing this story, Cole and CJ. Let's not wait so long for an update, next time. Don't make me nag you!

Love ya,
Pammy

Author's Response: Hey Pammy, Nick is just anxious about being home in general, it's a whole new chapter of his life. In my head I call Jerald a meanie sometimes over how he behaves with Kevin. Well you got what you wanted, chapter three has a little bit of Nick with his dad. I'm traveling for the next two weeks so the next update will be post the 5th of December.

Reviewer: luckystarre Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/13 04:24 am Title: Chapter One

Thank you so much for posting this story. I liked the original version, but I am incredibly excited for this new & improved story. I can't wait until the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words. We're glad you're enjoying this version too. Thank you for reading and reviewing, we appreciate it!

Reviewer: lmalg Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/13 07:50 am Title: Chapter One

Awww how sweet Brian and AJ have a little Sebby.   It's good to be reading about everyone again.  You've made a great start. I can't wait to see how things will progress.



Author's Response: Thank you Linda! Brian and AJ just had to have their own little Sebby, there was no other name that fit in my mind. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/13 04:15 am Title: Chapter One

Okay....I'm going to try not to "remember" the previous "An Ideal Marriage?"! So, it appears that Nick has had a miscarriage, right?  I like the way you handled the support given to him by his friends....subtle and supportive without offering condolences.  Awwww...I missed Corey.  I love his and Nick's interactions. And AJ and Brian with a baby....sweet!  I'm looking forward to reading more.

Love ya,

Pammy



Author's Response: You are a doll. Considering how often you worked with us as our beta for the previous version, it's great that you're so receptive to this version too. Yes, Nick has had a miscarriage, the same as he did in the previous version. Thank you for your kind words. Missed you, love ya :)