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Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/13 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hello! I was just on the AC-board and saw that your story is this month's featured one, so here I am reading and reviewing!
Like the first chapter, especially the first half is very intriguing!

Author's Response: Hi! It's great to see a new reader, especially as a result of the "featured story"! I hope you continue to like it!

Reviewer: Lynzer4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/13 03:47 am Title: Chapter 1

Good story thus far!

Kendall is a little to quick to find the killer. Any good detective would of realized that a major pop star would have poeple that could witness him in LA at the time of the murder.

Does Andrew have a brother? I couldn't recall if you mentioned one in the other story.

Well you have me hooked. Can't wait to find out what and who this ghost is.

Author's Response: Thanks! It's great to see a review from someone new! Yes, Kendall has a lot to learn, but more details on that in the next chapter! And, no, there was no brother for Andrew mentioned in the previous story. Glad to see that you're hooked!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/13 01:34 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm just sending this to you out of curiousity to see if you'll get it. I don't get how you were able to respond to that review if the reviews are diabled LOL This is magic!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/13 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

I don't know! I can access the site from the reviews but when I try to just access it I can't! I might try to update my story now by clicking on the page from here! We'll see if it works lol

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/13 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great start Emily, I know I'm going to enjoy this!  



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I hope it goes well!

 

Reviewer: Tweetersweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/13 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yeah! Nick and Annie! Sounds good so far.  I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Good to see you again!  This one is going to be a lot different from FILA, but definitely the same characters, so I hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/13 03:27 am Title: Chapter 1

YAY!!! So happy to have more of the Nick and Annie story!!! Can't wait to see what you do with it!



Author's Response:

Yay! I'm glad you're looking forward to it!  I'm both excited and really nervous about this one, because I'm reaching out of my comfort zone a bit.  I hope you like it!!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/13 03:07 am Title: Chapter 1

So here is your suspense story! I'm glad you decided to post it! I liked your first chapter. You did a great job channeling Nick and I liked the banter between Nick and Brian. Not sure where the suspense is going to come in but considering Nick was talking about ghosts, I am assuming someone he thought was dead is in fact very much alive. Good job making that part nice and creepy.



Author's Response:

That's a good assumption!  I can't tell you if it's a wrong or right assumption, but it's a good one, nonetheless :)  I guess you'll have to keep reading?  I like that you think I do a good job channeling Nick.  That's a great compliment!  And I'll take "nice and creepy" as a compliment, too!

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/13 02:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, another story by u! And I'm glad it's another Nick and Annie story, I like the pair! (But don't give uOnondaga your others, as I'm a Kevin girl)

cant wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I promise there will be more Kevin coming soon!  This is the only story I'm making much progress on at the moment, though, so I thought why not just start posting it?  Perhaps, he'll make a few appearances in this one, too :)

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/13 02:21 am Title: Chapter 1

You posted it! Yay! I enjoyed this revised version of the first chapter - I liked the scene you added ahead of what you had sent me to read. It gives the whole story a creepier, more ominous vibe right off the bat, which is what you want in a suspense! I'm wondering who the guy Nick saw or thought he saw outside was. I'm guessing Andrew, because of the ring and the fact that he seemed to think he might be a ghost LOL. I hope this means you're having good luck with this story! Great start, and I'm looking forward to reading more soon! :)

Author's Response:

Well I'm not having much luck writing anything else!  I figured I may as well go ahead and start posting this one.  I'm glad you liked the beginning I ended up going with.  I rewrote it couple times before I decided to just go with it!  I have just a few chapters written so far, but it's basically already outlined. so we'll see how it goes!  I'm hoping I can actually pull this off!