Date: 09/10/13 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hmm, I kinda feel he's overreacting quite a bit, but maybe that's just me... great chapter though!
Author's Response: Maybe-- but I wouldn't have dedicated an entire chapter to this unless there wasn't something to it, right? Stay tuned!
Date: 08/12/13 04:26 am Title: Chapter 5
Catching up! Synchronized swimmers... *snort* I loved the reference to recording Feels Like Home - part of the fun of this series is how current you keep it! Nick's phone conversation with Annie was very suspenseful, mostly because of his reaction to what she and most people would consider a minor inconvenience. Had it not been for the fact that I know this is going to be a suspense story, I would say he was overreacting, but now I'm wondering... was it really just a dead battery, or has someone been tampering with the security system, plotting to get in? Not sure if this is the actual start to the suspense storyline or just a red herring meant to keep us guessing, but I'm enjoying it either way!
Author's Response: Good to see you again! Nice interpretation of the security system thing. It is significant. Otherwise, I wouldn't have dedicated a chapter to it. How it's significant is just something you'll have to keep reading to find out! And yes, I always try to include references to real BSB events happening in the timeline of my stories instead of fictionalizing everything. I think that gives it a little something that makes it more convincing as fanfiction.
Date: 08/09/13 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
That chapter had me holding my breath too! Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Glad I got the intended response! Thanks, Steph!
Date: 08/09/13 07:48 am Title: Chapter 5
Ahhh FEELS LIKE HOME, the best part of that song is Kevin's verse, I could listen to that on repeat. Still mad Canada doesn't have a mention on it!
Man this story is getting me creeped out with the alarm breaking and stuff now, don't scare me!
Author's Response: Well, I've done my job if you're getting scared! Lol. Love that verse!
Date: 08/08/13 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
Poor Nick losing out on the Kentucky line. I admit that song is growing on me now. I wasn't a huge fan at first. And I had to lol just visually picturing Brian moving his chair closer to Nick so he could eavesdrop. That was so clear to me for some reason. I could see him doing that. I'm sure that alarm not working has some relevance to what's going on within the story to center an entire chapter around it, so I'll be curious to see how it all ties into the main plot once we get there. My neighbors alarm goes off like once a day! It's annoying as hell! LMAO
Author's Response: I can definitely see Brian doing that, too. I do really like that song, but will admit I probably wouldn't like it quite as much I if weren't for the first verse. Lol. Yes, the alarm system issue is significant for later on, but I fear maybe you're getting bored and are ready for some action. It's coming, I promise.
