Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/13 07:20 am Title: Chapter 9

Wow, quite the chapter this one.
I haven't read FILA (that's the correct abbreviation, right? ), so I am kinda confused as to what Nick is thinking back to that happened in January. Or maybe people who did read FILA don't know either?
That would be quite the shocker, if it turns out Andrew is still alive. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Andrew still being alive would be something else, wouldn't it? ;) To help you out with your comments about what happened back in January, that's one of those things that only the FILA readers are going to know at this point, and I may keep it that way. I want this story to be able to stand alone with enough background story given that the new readers aren't totally confused, since it's a different genre. However, I also want to leave some things a mystery in the event that some new readers decide to go back and read the original.

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/13 11:49 am Title: Chapter 9

Oh my God I just left you the longest review ever and then when I hit submit, it didn't take! *stabbity stab*

Now I'm going to have to try to remember what I just said! Goodness..

I can't believe this Kendall guy. He is really quickly becoming someone I want to poke annoyingly with a big stick. First he just lets Annie and her brother roam around an active crime scene as if they are members of NCIS and then he makes Nick a suspect just because they find one strand of blonde hair at the crime scene that he's letting random people roam around in. Not even bothering to realize that Nick was nowhere near there and with the boys. Ugh! He's annoying me. lol

I really liked Josh's little blow up at Nick. It seemed very real and a great way to remind us that it wasn't only Annie who lost her parents. I forgot to ask you this in my last review, but is Josh a new character or was he introduced in the first story? I wasn't sure if the memories you brought up were flashbacks to the prior story or new memories introduced in this one.

Interesting now that she has actually seen Andrew and of course why shouldn't he be roaming around the active crime scene as well? *shakes head at  Kendall!* I wonder is she'll tell Nick about seeing him or keep it to herself?

If this doesn't take I might scream! If I have to do this again the review you'll end up seeing is "Good job!" lmao

Author's Response: Um....this is weird. But, whenever you're able to see this, here's my response! Kendall's not supposed to be a character you like right now, so that's good. Now, just to clarify, he didn't exactly leave Annie and Josh roaming around by themselves. The police officer (Davis) was still with them. Maybe I didn't make that clear enough. Josh is essentially a new character. He was mentioned in name only and very briefly in the last story. That story does tells about how exactly Andrew died and the circumstances surrounding it, but it's not something I'm going to discuss in much detail in this story because it would give away too much from the last one. So, to answer your question, Josh's reaction to that time in Annie's life is something new, but it's still a flashback to the other story, if that makes any sense? Purposefully not responding to the rest of your comments about this chapter :)