Date: 09/11/13 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 10
I don't like where this is going.. and I don't like Jones one bit.
Author's Response: That seems to be the general consensus around here. lol
Date: 08/25/13 09:58 am Title: Chapter 10
What?! This is crazy! I don't believe Nick had anything to do with the murder, but I am wondering how his DNA could have gotten underneath Mrs. Donohue's fingernails. Maybe he was framed. I liked the scenes with the police detective. Normally I don't particularly care to read about minor characters who aren't Backstreet Boys, but in this case it was interesting to see what was going on behind the scenes as the case was being built against Nick. I wonder how Annie will react when she finds out he's been arrested!
Author's Response: Thanks Julie! I felt like I needed to delve a little deeper into the detector because he's going to be there through the whole story. And yes, ti build the case against Nick. I'm excited about Annie's next big scene, so I hope you like it (not the next chapter of Brian telling her, but what she's going to do next). Glad you seem to have had a good first week of school!
Date: 08/25/13 09:53 am Title: Chapter 10
What?! This is crazy! I don't believe Nick had anything to do with the murder, but I am wondering how his DNA could have gotten underneath Mrs. Donohue's fingernails. Maybe he was framed. I liked the scenes with the police detective. Normally I don't particularly care to read about minor characters who aren't Backstreet Boys, but in this case it was interesting to see what was going on behind the scenes as the case was being built against Nick. I wonder how Annie will react when she finds out he's been arrested!
Date: 08/23/13 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
Whaaaat? No he is wrong!
Author's Response: Maybe? :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/22/13 03:59 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh my! You know who else has blonde hair? Leighanne! Just sayin' lol
I still don't understand how Nick can possibly be a suspect if he was with the boys when the murder happened, unless I'm missing something? I'm sure you'll explain all that eventually. I'm just impatient.
I hate when people are framed for things it makes me nuts! Obviously Leighanne and Annie are secret lovers and decided the best way to get Nick out of the picture is to frame him for her parents murder so they hired their homicidal Brian from "One Phone Call" to take care of things! NAILED IT!!
Sorry, I had to... but seriously, nicely done. I like how you write your coppers! LOL
Just letting you know, now that school is starting up, I might not always get a chance to read on the day you update. But it doesn't mean I don't love you though lol
Author's Response: Oh! I had forgotten about homicidal "One Phone Call" Brian! He IS blonde, too... And yes, more explanation in the next chapter, actually. Good to know that you still love me! LOL
Date: 08/21/13 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh lord! This is not good for Nick! I think it was Aarron lol! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Nope. Not good for Nick. I wondered when the Aaron theories would start. Lol. But why would he want to kill Annie's parents? Thanks for reading and reviewing. All will be revealed.....eventually. :)
