Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/13 01:05 am Title: Chapter 18

Wow, you're mean! instead of killing him right off you are making him suffer a slow, painful death! Good job with all the medical jargon. Loved the little concerned phone call from AJ.

Author's Response: The AJ phone call is a little bit of a throwback to the first story, actually (if anyone's noticed that, they haven't said so). I think I've said before that the medical jargon is one of those things that I know just enough about to not have to do any research about. Now boat crashes- I've had to do a lot of research on boat crashes while trying to make sure Big Brother doesnt think i have any crazy motives. Haha

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/13 09:45 am Title: Chapter 18

Pour Katie, Annie and Nick. And Josh of course. Great chapter though! Can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really appreciate the reviews every chapter. They make such a difference in keeping me motivated!