Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/14 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 20

I have this new rule about waiting until a fic is done before I read the entire thing if people take too long to update it, but alas, I found myself reading this anyway. lol

I have to admit, until I got to the part about Nick explaining to her what had happened with her brother writing Andrew's name on the paper, I had no idea what was going on but it was nice you included that in this chapter for people like me who can't remember things.

I knew AJ was going to drag Nick to a medium. Is that your jump the shark thing you were talking about? It didn't feel jump the shark-ish to me. It seemed like a natural progression and something AJ would definitely want to do.

Interesting thing about Nick's dad. He's still alive, right? Oh wasn't he a suspect or something? See? This is why you have to update more than once every three months. lol

Author's Response: Well, I have to say I'm surprised to see this, since you said you weren't reading until stories are finished now and all. It's a pleasant surprise. Yes, this is the "jump the shark" scenario I was worried about. Just worried some readers will think it's starting to get a little too "out there." I think it's exactly the type of thing AJ would do, too. I'm working on the story right now, so I'm hoping to start updating relatively regularly again (finger's crossed, anyway). Thanks, Mare!