Date: 11/18/13 03:33 am Title: Chapter 19
Once again, loved the phone call from AJ and Nick talking about how important the guys are in his life now and how he intends to lean on them more. Of course I tend to focus more on that then Annie and her family drama. I thought the words without words goodbye was nice. If this is Andrew why on earth would he be trying to kill her family? Unless she killed him and now his ghost is out for revenge? Nick buddy, maybe it's time to reconsider relationships? I'm sure Howie can set you up with another one of his nieces who isn't plagued with a psychopathic ex husband ghost of a potential killer fiance.
Author's Response: LOL! The Annie family drama is just about over now, so you've got that going for you. "Psychopathic rx husband ghost of a potential killer fiance" Nice!
Date: 11/14/13 01:05 am Title: Chapter 18
Wow, you're mean! instead of killing him right off you are making him suffer a slow, painful death! Good job with all the medical jargon. Loved the little concerned phone call from AJ.
Author's Response: The AJ phone call is a little bit of a throwback to the first story, actually (if anyone's noticed that, they haven't said so). I think I've said before that the medical jargon is one of those things that I know just enough about to not have to do any research about. Now boat crashes- I've had to do a lot of research on boat crashes while trying to make sure Big Brother doesnt think i have any crazy motives. Haha
Date: 11/11/13 10:33 am Title: Chapter 18
Oh i don't like this doppelgänger fellow! Sigh great chapter though!
Author's Response: Yes, he is a mystery! Thank you so much!
Date: 11/11/13 09:45 am Title: Chapter 18
Pour Katie, Annie and Nick. And Josh of course. Great chapter though! Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really appreciate the reviews every chapter. They make such a difference in keeping me motivated!
Date: 10/25/13 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 17
Aww, you didn't kill him? At least he was maimed. That's something. Curious if they are after Nick or Annie. Poor Burnt Nick though. Burnt Nick....sounds yummy with some BBQ sauce. I am SO hungry right now! lol
Author's Response: I read this on my cell phone while sitting at a red light on the way home from work and burst out laughing! Guy in the car beside me thought I was nuts...
Date: 10/21/13 06:51 am Title: Chapter 17
Wow, I didn't think Josh could still be alive! I'm not sure if I hope he'll make it though, seeing how bad his injuries are and how he'll suffer if he does.
I'm glad Nick was the one who saved him so at least he knows he did everything he could.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm actually still not sure what I'm going to do with Josh yet, but it will happen in the next chapter one way or another!
Date: 10/21/13 05:43 am Title: Chapter 17
I bet it was Aarron ;) just kidding! I was wonderful to see another great update! I'm excited to read more!
Author's Response: LOL. Was that you with the Aaton theory a few chapters back? Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/05/13 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh no!
Author's Response: I know, right? Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/05/13 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow, u sure leave me hanging at the end of this chapter. UPDATE NOW!
So cute how u had Drew "tongue" his Mum as we all know Nick is famous for that move (particularly towards Kevin! hahahaha)
This whole thing with the missing wedding album and Annie still seeing her dead husband has me all freaked out. And where is Frank. How does this whole puzzle fit together.
And noJosh and the boat accident, my goodness!
Update soon, I need answers;)
Author's Response: Wow, long review! All of your feedback is pretty much exactly the type of feedback I was expecting for this chapter! I will try my best to update sometime this week!
Date: 10/05/13 01:02 am Title: Chapter 16
Oh my God so Annie's brother was blown up? lmao that's awesome! I was just thinking he was going to annoy me. So, whoever is doing all of this doesn't really like Annie's family very much huh? Perhaps Annie is next? Better keep her away from sharp objects or things that can or may blow up. Maybe it's not someone from Annie's past but someone from Nick's who wants Annie and her family totally out of the picture! Hrmm.. things to ponder.
Author's Response: Haha! Of course you would be the one to get excited about someone getting blown up!And I like to read about your pondering...
Date: 10/04/13 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 16
I'm so glad you updated!
Could I still be right though? Andrew isn't dead?
Hmmm, this is getting better and better!
Can't wait for another update ;)
Author's Response: You might be right, and you might not. That's what makes writing this kind of story fun. Again, thank you so much!
Date: 09/22/13 08:32 am Title: Chapter 15
Powerful chapter. Glad Kevin knew about Frank and had supported Nick in the past.
This whole Frank situation took me by surprise, can't wait to read more of this! (Any inspiration for the red sweatpants story?)
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, actually. I plan on getting the sweatpants story moving along after a few more chapters of this one. That one actually takes place after this one, so there are a couple significant things I wanted to reveal before moving along with the other story.
Date: 09/22/13 05:08 am Title: Chapter 15
I think I'm even more "WTF?" over this thing with Nick's dad than Brian was. It's interesting that Nick didn't tell any of the guys, except Kevin, but I can see why he wouldn't. The whole thing is pretty crazy!
Author's Response: It is! And honestly, I'm not so sure how I feel about it myself, but I think it's a necessary subplot for the rest of the story, so we'll see how it all pans out!
Date: 09/22/13 05:03 am Title: Chapter 14
Hm... not sure how I feel about the whole "Frank Carter" thing. That seemed to come out of nowhere. I could see the connection to Annie's father once it was mentioned that he'd been an orderly at a hospital, since I remembered Annie's dad was a surgeon, but I'm having a hard time accepting his existence at all, since as far as I can remember, it was never mentioned earlier in this story or in FILA that Bob Carter was not Nick's biological father. I wish that seed had been planted already, if it turns out that he's the one doing this.
Author's Response: So, Frank is actually a subplot I came up with after I had the rest of the story planned out. That's not to say that he is or isn't involved, but that he's not the whole story. I sort of WANTED him to come out of nowhere, and I wanted it to be a family member of Nick's to establish how it looked like Nick might be a suspect. However, I tend to shy away from writing much about his real family, considering the real-life dysfunction there. So, there's Frank.
Date: 09/22/13 04:59 am Title: Chapter 13
Interesting... What Nick's dad would have to do with this, I don't know, but at least they don't think it's Nick any longer. I loved the scenes of each of the guys defending him. You're doing a nice job keeping the bromance alive in this story instead of making it all about Annie and Nick.
Author's Response: I'm trying to make this one less focused on the romance, even though they're the characters from FILA.
