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Reviewer: Tweetersweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/13 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 10

Oh lord! This is not good for Nick! I think it was Aarron lol! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Nope. Not good for Nick. I wondered when the Aaron theories would start. Lol. But why would he want to kill Annie's parents? Thanks for reading and reviewing. All will be revealed.....eventually. :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/13 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter, very spooky if she is seeing his ghost! Ugh, imagine that, a vengeful ghost coming back to cause havoc :(

Author's Response: That would be something, huh? Guess you will have to keep reading to find out! haha

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/13 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 8

Nooooo they can't suspect Nick! That hair could've been there since he visited to ask about getting married, or someone could be trying to frame him :(

Author's Response: Either of those could be a possibility :) Thanks, Steph!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/13 01:34 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm just sending this to you out of curiousity to see if you'll get it. I don't get how you were able to respond to that review if the reviews are diabled LOL This is magic!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/13 11:49 am Title: Chapter 9

Oh my God I just left you the longest review ever and then when I hit submit, it didn't take! *stabbity stab*

Now I'm going to have to try to remember what I just said! Goodness..

I can't believe this Kendall guy. He is really quickly becoming someone I want to poke annoyingly with a big stick. First he just lets Annie and her brother roam around an active crime scene as if they are members of NCIS and then he makes Nick a suspect just because they find one strand of blonde hair at the crime scene that he's letting random people roam around in. Not even bothering to realize that Nick was nowhere near there and with the boys. Ugh! He's annoying me. lol

I really liked Josh's little blow up at Nick. It seemed very real and a great way to remind us that it wasn't only Annie who lost her parents. I forgot to ask you this in my last review, but is Josh a new character or was he introduced in the first story? I wasn't sure if the memories you brought up were flashbacks to the prior story or new memories introduced in this one.

Interesting now that she has actually seen Andrew and of course why shouldn't he be roaming around the active crime scene as well? *shakes head at  Kendall!* I wonder is she'll tell Nick about seeing him or keep it to herself?

If this doesn't take I might scream! If I have to do this again the review you'll end up seeing is "Good job!" lmao



Author's Response: Um....this is weird. But, whenever you're able to see this, here's my response! Kendall's not supposed to be a character you like right now, so that's good. Now, just to clarify, he didn't exactly leave Annie and Josh roaming around by themselves. The police officer (Davis) was still with them. Maybe I didn't make that clear enough. Josh is essentially a new character. He was mentioned in name only and very briefly in the last story. That story does tells about how exactly Andrew died and the circumstances surrounding it, but it's not something I'm going to discuss in much detail in this story because it would give away too much from the last one. So, to answer your question, Josh's reaction to that time in Annie's life is something new, but it's still a flashback to the other story, if that makes any sense? Purposefully not responding to the rest of your comments about this chapter :)

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/13 06:00 am Title: Chapter 9

Oh my gosh, is Nick being framed. could Andrew really be alive?
Felt bad for Nick when Josh snapped at him but at the same time Josh doesn't know and he is dealing with a lot of grief as well.
Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Those are both really good questions! And yes, the thing about Nick and Annie that Josh doesn't know is something I kind of left open so that only those of you who read the last story would know what I was talking about. So maybe a new reader might go backand read the last one! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/13 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

I don't know! I can access the site from the reviews but when I try to just access it I can't! I might try to update my story now by clicking on the page from here! We'll see if it works lol

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/13 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter. I love how intricately you described the crime scene. So, this person might be framing Nick, huh? Lucky he has the guys as an alibi. Interesting developments. Is Annie a blonde? LOL

 

 



Author's Response: Haha. No. I think I explained that one already. Does this mean we're back in business?

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/13 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 7

Poor Annie and her brother, that must be awful! But who did it? I can't wait to find out :)



Author's Response: You might be surprised! Thanks , Steph!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/13 05:28 am Title: Chapter 7

I love that Howie came along with Nick to help take care of him and all the loose ends he kept forgetting. Poor Annie; I can't imagine getting that kind of news. At least she has her brother and Nick (and Drew) - otherwise, she's lost everyone she loves! Sounds like whoever did this knew what they were doing. If they cleaned up the crime scene that well, it doesn't sound like a robbery gone wrong to me (not that I ever would have that it was something random like that). It was definitely pre-meditated. I'm curious to find out what's coming next!

Author's Response: I'm excited to show you what happens next, but still some work to do on the next chapter, unfortunately! If only I could sit around all day writing. lol. Howie is definitely one of my favorite people to write!

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/13 05:27 am Title: Chapter 7

Okay this is so creepy and yet so good! I can't believe her parents were murdered!
Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really excited to get moving along on this one! So much plot in my head that I've yet to type out!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/13 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 7

Once again, fantastic descriptions! I'm sure you're probably getting tired of me always telling you that, but it's true! I also love how your characterization of Howie not only in this one but Forever as well. He is that great and caring friend that you always want around. If I didn't know that you were a Kevin girl, I would completely think Howie was your favorite! I'm curious to know why Annie's parents were killed. Why would someone want to hurt her enough to do that? Unless it is her. Hrmmm... Great update!

Author's Response: LOL. I love your little conspiracy theories that Annie is the villain. Also, though Kevin is definitely my favorite, Howie has been a very close second for most of my BSB life. Nick is actually a pretty new development. I definitely see Howie as that great friend you always want to have around. Thanks as always, Mare!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/13 04:35 am Title: Chapter 6

Wow! Well, I wasn't expecting that, but I guess it goes along with what I've been thinking. "Someone" is coming for Annie and/or Drew, and they're taking out people close to her along the way. Keep up the great work; this is getting interesting!!

Author's Response: Thanks again! I'm excited to be really getting into the "action" of the storyline, so to speak.

Author's Response: Thanks again! I'm excited to be really getting into the "action" of the storyline, so to speak.

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/13 04:26 am Title: Chapter 5

Catching up! Synchronized swimmers... *snort* I loved the reference to recording Feels Like Home - part of the fun of this series is how current you keep it! Nick's phone conversation with Annie was very suspenseful, mostly because of his reaction to what she and most people would consider a minor inconvenience. Had it not been for the fact that I know this is going to be a suspense story, I would say he was overreacting, but now I'm wondering... was it really just a dead battery, or has someone been tampering with the security system, plotting to get in? Not sure if this is the actual start to the suspense storyline or just a red herring meant to keep us guessing, but I'm enjoying it either way!

Author's Response: Good to see you again! Nice interpretation of the security system thing. It is significant. Otherwise, I wouldn't have dedicated a chapter to it. How it's significant is just something you'll have to keep reading to find out! And yes, I always try to include references to real BSB events happening in the timeline of my stories instead of fictionalizing everything. I think that gives it a little something that makes it more convincing as fanfiction.

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/13 11:52 am Title: Chapter 6

Wow.....
Her parents got murdered?! omg....

Author's Response: Yep, they were. This is where a lot of the action starts, so I hope you like it!