Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/13 03:04 am Title: Chapter 6

You probably alread knew that I would really enjoy this chapter, but I'll say it anyway. I really enoyed this chapter. LOL I know you think you don't capture the boys and their relationships well and of course I love reading those relationships above everything else, but you really should write them more often and for all I know, maybe you do and I just haven't read the stories where it happens, but this scene felt completely real and intimate to me. Two really good friends sharing a moment. Seemed like you did it pretty flawlessly. And it was nice to see a murder. lmao that's probably a weird thing to hear but welcome to the world of suspense when weird things like that are said often, followed by I hope there's more to come!

Author's Response: LOL. There is, in fact, "more to come." I'll give you that much. Thanks so much for saying all of that. Forever is definitely my least "bromantic" story, as it's more about the girls, but as far as my others go, while they may still be "female-centered" fics, there are a lot more scenes like this one in them.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/13 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 4

Interesting...so it wasn't Annie who got the ring out? I can't wait to see what happens! Oh, and I'm glad she said yes to Nick :)

Author's Response: Nope, not Annie :) and yay, Annie and Nick!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/13 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

Poor Nick losing out on the Kentucky line. I admit that song is growing on me now. I wasn't a huge fan at first. And I had to lol just visually picturing Brian moving his chair closer to Nick so he could eavesdrop. That was so clear to me for some reason. I could see him doing that. I'm sure that alarm not working has some relevance to what's going on within the story to center an entire chapter around it, so I'll be curious to see how it all ties into the main plot once we get there. My neighbors alarm goes off like once a day! It's annoying as hell! LMAO

Author's Response: I can definitely see Brian doing that, too. I do really like that song, but will admit I probably wouldn't like it quite as much I if weren't for the first verse. Lol. Yes, the alarm system issue is significant for later on, but I fear maybe you're getting bored and are ready for some action. It's coming, I promise.

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/13 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 4

Aaw love it! But something tells me..things are not what it seems ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm excited about this story line. Hope you like where it's going!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/13 02:07 am Title: Chapter 4

Hey Emily, just catching up. So, as someone reading this who has no clue about Annie, Nick and their history, this is what I am making of this situation. So Her husband is dead. Not sure if he was an ex husband or he died while they were marrried? Or maybe she killed him and hacked him to little bits and fed him to their dog? (okay probably not but if she was a psycho that would be entertaining lol) and they had a kid. She's a gospel singer with Brian but she's seeing Nick. Am I up to speed?

I'm assuming by taking a turn you mean the suspense element will start next chapter? I'm looking forward to seeing how you're turning this into a suspense. A ghost or the never dead in the first place scenerio or some kind of other twist. Once I commit, I promise I will be more consistent with my reviewing! LOL I just wanted you to know I'm still reading and I'm sure lots of other people are as well they just aren't being as cool and taking the time to review like I am! Get with it people! LOL

Author's Response:

Haha. Thanks for that.  I'd say you're basically up to speed, but maybe re-read a bit of the last chapter for a clearer explanation of Annie's relationship with her deceased husband?  I'm glad you're still reading this, and I do hope you enjoy it.  I've already warned you that it's a bit "female based," but probably less so than the last one, and definitely less so than Forever, and yes, a bit of the suspense element coming up in the next chapter.  A lot more plot unfolding in the couple after that.  That's all I can say for now :)

Reviewer: Tweetersweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/13 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 3

Aww! That's so sweet! I like the story so far I know that it's different than FILA and I like that I just don't want Andrew to be the sinister force.  I liked him too LOL!

 

Author's Response:

I guess you'll just have to wait and see! Thanks!

Reviewer: Tweetersweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/13 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yeah! Nick and Annie! Sounds good so far.  I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Good to see you again!  This one is going to be a lot different from FILA, but definitely the same characters, so I hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/13 03:07 am Title: Chapter 1

So here is your suspense story! I'm glad you decided to post it! I liked your first chapter. You did a great job channeling Nick and I liked the banter between Nick and Brian. Not sure where the suspense is going to come in but considering Nick was talking about ghosts, I am assuming someone he thought was dead is in fact very much alive. Good job making that part nice and creepy.

Author's Response:

That's a good assumption!  I can't tell you if it's a wrong or right assumption, but it's a good one, nonetheless :)  I guess you'll have to keep reading?  I like that you think I do a good job channeling Nick.  That's a great compliment!  And I'll take "nice and creepy" as a compliment, too!