Date: 08/09/13 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooh this is reminding me of Men In Black a little, so exciting! Nick in a kind of space ship thing fighting evil angels will be awesome :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Steph! Glad you think it'll be awesome :)
Date: 08/08/13 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Okay so I was going to wait until you got to chapter 5 before I decided to continue reading but then I saw in your updsate thread that you have all the way up to chapter 8 already so I just went ahead and decided to read it. Don't you love my standards? LOL
I love the concept of the angels wanting to take back the world! It's so funny that generally whenever anyone talks or writes about angels these days they tend to be douches! I wonder what they think of that. I love Nick's thoughts throughout this chapter especially the bit about Kevin not caring he was taken away to this mysterous organization. I would be a tad nervous if it was up to Nick to save us all but as long as spelling and grammar aren't anywhere in the equation, I'd be willing to give him a chance!
Now saying all this! If I do get sucked into this story you are NOT allowed to just disappear. If I have to kidnap those 1D kids I will! Although, I guess that would give you even more fodder to write about them. Blah!
LOL Nice job! :O)
Author's Response: Hey, your standards are clearly working out for me LOL. I have had quite the motivation on this one lately, even though I've had the outline for it comepleted for a couple of years now. It's nice to be actually writing it. I'm glad you like the concept, though not entirely mine I did tweak it and add some twists to it. It's funny that you mention angels as being douches these days lol I didn't really think of that, ha! I am enjoying writing Nick's thoughts, as I usually do so I'm glad you like them, and the Kevin bit :) LOL at the comment about Nick's grammar, so true! I am trying my best to not disappear - 8 chapters complete out of an outlined 25 so far and I am severely blocked on my 1D stuff anyhow. Though I will accept you kidnapping them and sending them to me as a reward for sticking with this story when I finish it. Hahaha. Thanks for the review, Mare! Much appreciated! :)
Date: 08/02/13 05:10 am Title: Chapter 2
huh what makes Nick so special that he is involved in this fight. Interesting that angels are the bad guys. Will be waiting for more.
Author's Response: Thanks, Lore! There will be an explanation about Nick in the next couple of chapters :)
Date: 08/02/13 04:21 am Title: Chapter 2
Whoa, okay I need to know more Steph. But you're doing a great job with this. You're telling just enough while driving me a little crazy cause it's not everything. I love how versatile you've become too :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Rose! I appreciate that, I don't want to give it all away but obviously I do want to reveal some things so you guys aren't going "huh?" the entire time LOL. And thanks for the versatile comment as well! :)
