Date: 08/12/13 11:16 am Title: Chapter 5
I don't blame Nick for being as frustrated and mad as he was. These people kind of suck ass when it comes to training. I liked the idea of the angels being specks of light and not your stereotypical white gown wearing, winged people with halos. I also love the fact that even though the boys aren't really present you have Nick take the time to at least talk to one of them or flashback to a memory of them per chapter. That's what probably keeps me reading and so entertained you have so much going on, all the excitement with the fighting angels but still the inclusion of the bromantic moments. As long as they keep going and it doesn't turn into a love story, I'll be sticking around. :O) Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Mare! They really do suck when it comes to training and keeping their pilots informed LOL no wonder Nick was so upset! I'm glad you liked the description of the angels, I took inspiration from the show this is based off of but I still wanted to do something a little different with that aspect of it. It definitely won't be a love story - I can't promise bromantic moments in every chapter but the boys will be there throughout, they're not going anywhere! Thanks again :)
