Date: 08/27/13 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 12
I got that part with Brian (which was adorably cute by the way lol) I just meant everything proceeding the point where he woke up. in other words, where did the dream start and the real events end? That's what I was confused about. Since they had no idea who Russell was, I thought maybe they had never actually encountered him to that point in the villain kind of way as far as him shooting at them etc.... Does that make sense? I don't know if I'm making sense. LOL
Author's Response: When Russell started shooting and they ran (before the creek) is actually where Nick's imagination kicks in. I wanted to make people be like WTF and guess until Brian mentioned Kevin was fine ;)
Date: 08/27/13 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 12
Glad to see you updated. It was nice to find something to read before work. So, the whole Russell thing chasing them initially was a dream? Or was this last sequence a dream? That's the only thing I was a little confused about? Keep in mind it's also 5:30 in the morning lol I might reread this later and be like "Oh duh...I get it!" But regardless if it's a dream or not, I enjoyed the action sequence at the end there with everyone jumping on Russell and also the visual image of him holding a gun to Nick's head. You made that image very vivid! I'm glad to see no one was shot or killed. Okay... I reread it lol and Duh, I know the second half wasn't a dream, but still unsure about the first half. Don't you love my blabbering thought process? I'm curious to know more about Russell. He's got anger management issues! LOL Great update, Tracy!
Author's Response: I did mention the first part was a dream...I actually had to go and reread it myself to see what I wrote LOL. When Nick woke up in Brian's lap, he had fainted. I even had Brian explain the fainting :p but thanks for the comments, that made me happy to see. I will try to touch more on Russell soon. Thanks!
Date: 08/25/13 11:14 am Title: Chapter 11
Well shit!! Thanks for leaving me off on a cliffhanger right when I catch up on the chapters I've missed this week! LOL I liked the last two chapters; the guys' realization that they were being hunted was delightfully creepy. Can't wait to find out what happened!!!
Author's Response: That was totally my intention. Score one for me LMAO. i am really flattered you are still managing to play catch up even though you're busy with work now. It means so much.to me. Thanks Julie!
Date: 08/23/13 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 11
update soon!!
Author's Response: I was busy with working yesterday but am working on a new chapter now. Thanks for reading!!
Date: 08/23/13 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 11
Omg....
Author's Response: This is my favorite kind of review LOL. thanks for reading!
Date: 08/23/13 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 11
We may not kill you but you sure are trying to kill us (and the guys) with those cliffhanger. LOL
Aww, Brian saying "Frack".
Author's Response: LOL I do my best. I love Brian calling him frack too. <3
Date: 08/23/13 09:24 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh cliffy! I chuckled at Kevin throwing a rock at Russell.. The visual I saw in my head was quite amusing. I really hope you didn't shoot anyone or kill any of them. I like my boys alive. It's a lot easier to read about them when they are alive versus when they are dead Good update!
Author's Response: I promise none of the boys will be dying....for now LOL. Kevin chucking rocks cracks me up....I can picture him doing that. Glad you liked it, thank you!
Date: 08/21/13 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
I hope he runs out of bullets and that they all miss their target! Russell is nuts! Aw poor Nick, thinking they don't care :(
Author's Response: here's to hoping. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 08/20/13 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 10
I left a comment in your update's thread but I guess it went erased with the new server. Booh.
Anyway... dear Nick, you're lucky you're already hurt or I was so gonna smack you in the head. Okay, the guys weren't that friendly but it's not like you were treating them (read my lips: BRIAN) better.
LOL Remember? You told someone (Brian) that you wished he would drop dead. =_=
So just be glad that you're still alive (barely) and they are caring now. Before Russell did something that you're so gonna regret!
Author's Response: I kind of want to kick Nick for acting like that....but I agree, he did do that and now he will hopefully appreciate them more. Thanks Cinzia
Date: 08/20/13 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 10
Uh oh! These guys really know how to get themselves into trouble, don't they? Poor Nick well poor all of them I guess. Scary that they have to run away from Russell when most of them can barely walk! Reviews are back, Tracy! And so is the site as a whole. Just in case you didn't know!
Author's Response: Yes being chased when you are already injured isn't fun at all. I'm so glad the site is back :) thanks Mare!
Date: 08/17/13 06:08 am Title: Chapter 8
Glad Nick got away from Russel and all the guys got out safely, can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks Kim! Nice to see new people reading :)
Date: 08/16/13 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 8
Aww great action in this one. I felt bad for Nick at first because it seemed like only Brian cared that he was gone but your line at the end made me feel better. Hpe Rusell doesn't catch up to him and I hope you get this review!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Mare. I hope not either!
Date: 08/16/13 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ooh...another nice little cliffie. Now the question begs to be asked: Russell or wild animal? And why can I leave a review???
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, new chapter was posted yesterday so you'll find out lol!
Date: 08/16/13 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
I wanted to write a serious review but as soon as I read "cave" I imagined Nick coming to save them while singing "You're the reason why cavemen drew on the walls" LOL
Okay, serious. I love this chapter! Nick, we know you're missing Brian. When you find him, be sure to kiss him, right?
Now they are all divided. What's gonna happen to them?
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review Cinzia :)
Date: 08/12/13 12:08 am Title: Chapter 7
I loved AJ in this chapter, asking Kevin if he was okay as the poor guy is stuck under the bus! LMAO
How did Nick and Russell end up so far away from the crash? Did they wander away or were they thrown from the bus? I hope Nick comes to his senses and realizes he's walking away with a nutjob!
Great update! :O)
Author's Response: sorry for the late reply. Yes they got ejected from the bus, but walked a bit. Thanks for the review Mare!
