Date: 08/11/13 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 7
Nick... what a gullible idiot! LOL That was way too easy for Russell to fool him like that. I hope they get Kevin out before he bleeds to death, if he really was shot. Keep up the great work, Tracy; you're on a roll with this one! It's nice to see you writing again! :)
Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to reply. Had a busy week ;) you bring up some good points and I am flattered you are welcoming my "comeback" so thank you sp much!!!
Date: 08/11/13 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
I hope none of the boys were hurt in the explosion! And poor dog :(
Author's Response: everyone is upset about the dog lol I love it. Thanks Steph!
Date: 08/11/13 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
O_O
You're evil. What a cliffhanger! I would never want to be in Nick's place right now, feeling desperate for his friend (and his Frick!) and feeling guilty because he's leaving them behind.
Loved the chapter!
Author's Response: Lmao thank you I take that as a compliment!!!
Date: 08/11/13 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
So much for hoping to avoid cliffhangers! The end of this chapter wasn't much better. Who else is alive?! Who else is hurt?! Did Kevin get shot?! I'm dying to know! Poor Tyke... RIP. That was so sad! :( I hope you post more soon!
Author's Response: You will see. Thanks for the review, Julie!
Date: 08/11/13 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Whoo hoo, it happened!!! I liked the classic "I wish you were dead" before you put them in a life-or-death situation. Be careful what you wish for, Boys! Nice set-up with the hijacking. And great cliffhanger with the bus crash! I'm kind of glad I'm reading this late so I can go on to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Julie!!! I am happy you're still reading and getting caught up on this. Waking up to reviews was something I missed for sure.
Date: 08/11/13 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
TV in the pool... that's a good one! I wonder if they ever did get banned from any hotels back in the day LOL.
Author's Response: I took Howie's story about the ironing board and made it a TV LOL. thanks Julie!!
Date: 08/11/13 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
It's interesting how the guys seem genuinely concerned about AJ, but not Nick. I wonder if that's how it really was back in the day, that AJ's problems were so big and so obvious that Nick's kind of got swept under the rug. I'm wondering when Russell is going to make his move!
Author's Response: honestly I think you might be right about that because they were all concerned for AJ and Nick felt alone. I can see this happening in real life too. Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/10/13 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
ç_ç Poor dog. ç_ç
Great chap!
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Author's Response: Thanks for reading Cinzia!
Date: 08/10/13 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
Why did you feel the need to kill the dog? LOL That was random. Poor thing :O( Is it sad that if it would have been any of the wives or children I would be like "Eh..." but the cute dog? That's just SO wrong! As least it wasn't Nacho. I don't think I could have continued reading if you killed Nacho, although Nacho wasn't even alive back then. okay enough ramblimg about dogs. Nicely done. Good action, hopefully Nick and Kevin are okay and neither one shot. My guess is at least one of them is with Russell.
Poor dog! :O(
okay done now lol ;o)
Author's Response: This review cracks me up a lot. I knew killing thr dog would piss people off but never expected so many LOL. i guess I have found a way to respond to these reviews, i clicked on a email that I had when you reviewed. Thanks Mare!
Date: 08/10/13 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
Noo not the dog!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 08/09/13 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh no! I hope they get out before it goes up in flames or something! Russ is a great bad guy, so evil :)
Author's Response: I love/hate Russ too! Thanks Steph.
Date: 08/09/13 07:16 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh. Oh. Oh.
Now things are really getting interesting. I really hope Nick won't have to regret wwishing that Brian would drop dead. Hurt yes, but no dead.
And my little FrickNFrack's heart melt when he called Brian without thinking. That's love. LOL
Great job!
Author's Response: Let's hope not. I love Nick and Brian so you know I gotta throw that wrench in there ;) thanks for reading!
Date: 08/09/13 04:58 am Title: Chapter 5
Oooh. Hope it wasn't Kevin who got shot! Dammit Russel! *waves pointy sticks* I am in NO mood here, man!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Time will tell, I may update again today. Thanks Lenni :)
Date: 08/09/13 02:46 am Title: Chapter 5
Nice job with the description of teh accident. I really hope you don't kill any of the boys. To bad Leighanne wasn't on the bus! LMAO Loved the hint of gasoline at the end. How funny that your accident and my accident were both Kevin's fault!
Author's Response: Thanks, I was worried it would come out awkward but I loved the description too, thanks for the review Mare!!
Date: 08/08/13 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
i kind of giggled with at the tv in the pool i could just imagine the look on Kevin's face when he saw it in the pool lol.
Author's Response: I can see it too. Thank you for reading :)
