Date: 08/08/13 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
LOL at AJ doing the rock star thing and throwing the TV out of the window and into the pool! Kevin's blood pressure must be rising with their antics :)
Author's Response: Kevin is going to have grey hair before this is over ;) thanks for reading Steph!!
Date: 08/08/13 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
It's sad to see them like that, especially Brian and Nick. #FrickNFrackForever
Though the part about the TV in the pool was really funny. It managed to break the tension so that we're now in a sort of calm before the storm.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: I laughed writing that part. Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the review!!!
Date: 08/08/13 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh, how heartbreaking to read them like this. Sadly, I'm sure it actually was like this on some level in the B&B era. I'm already looking forward to seeing some sort of resolution for them as a group after they go through whatever bad stuff they're going to go through. A girl can hope that's how it's going to go, at least!
Author's Response: I think that you may be right, because it seemed like this to me as well. Thank you for the review!!
Date: 08/08/13 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
I think you've done a great job at establishing how messed up Nick and AJ are and how divided they rest of the guys are because of it. I know you were talking about whether or not it was too early for the action to start but I say it's about time to bring it on. You've set up all the drama so it's like we're sitting on the top of the hill on a roller coaster ride and waiting for that first drop! :O)
Author's Response: Sorry for the late reply but thank you so much for reading and the advice. I appreciate it Mare!
Date: 08/07/13 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm looking forward to seeing what Russell has planned! Enjoying this Tracy :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much Steph. Hope you enjoy the rest too!!
Date: 08/07/13 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
i am loving this story! I cannot wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 08/07/13 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
They all were a mess, really.
It's hard to see them so angry with each other.
Great job with the chapter! ^__^
Author's Response: Believe me it is even harder to write them so angry! thanks for the review Cinzia!!#
Date: 08/07/13 10:49 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow, the guys all seem so disconnected. Again, this time period works well for this kind of story. I loved how they tried to talk to AJ but he would have none of that. And I also enjoyed your foreshadowing at the end of the chapter. Great job, Tracy!
Author's Response: poor disconnected boys!! It feels so good writing suspense again,.so as usual expect some mean cliffies :p thank you for the compliments, they mean a lot coming from you!
Date: 08/07/13 06:43 am Title: Chapter 3
They damn well better have Nick around. Watch your back Russel-my pointy sticks are about to come out already!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review Lenni!!
Date: 08/07/13 04:00 am Title: Chapter 3
uh-oh...update soon!
Author's Response: Nice to see a new reader. Thanks for the review!!!
Date: 08/07/13 03:58 am Title: Chapter 2
hmmm...avenge Chloe, curious where this is going update soon.
Rosalie
Author's Response: thanks so much for the review!!!
Date: 08/07/13 02:24 am Title: Chapter 2
Dun dun dun! I'm really liking this so far. Nice old school feel.
Author's Response: So awesome to see a new reader. I haven't written suspense in quite a while but I love the old school stuff. Thanks for the review!!!
Date: 08/06/13 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
Dun dun dun! This story has such an old-school suspense feel; I love it!! Poor Nick seems like he's a mess, and the other guys have no sympathy for him. You're doing a great job showing how the whole group is fractured. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Ah I missed writing suspense so much!! I am really pleased it is realistic how broken the guys are. That makes me happy. Thanks for the review Julie!
Date: 08/06/13 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really, really, really want to smack hard Brian. (Don't worry, he knows that I still love him. LOL)
"Nobody would care if anything happened to me". Oh Nick, you've just called on yourself. lol
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Brian is being really mean in this isn't he? LOL and Nick is basically asking for trouble thanks for the review!!!
Date: 08/06/13 04:22 pm Title: Prologue
Uh oh something is bout to go down!! Love it!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!!
