Date: 10/11/13 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well that place sounds like a dump, I think I'd be gagging at the smell lol!
Mmm and now Kevin, but I wonder what happened to make Eight/Alex leave?
Author's Response: oh yeah, dump city! blech!
Of course Kevin, like I'd leave him out of a story right ;) We shall see what it was that made Eight/Alex leave and what it exactly he was kicked out of.
Date: 10/11/13 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oooh so Howie has a secret ability! Interesting! I wonder who else will turn up and will they have abilities too?
Author's Response: That is Howie stole the spotlight. I had OTHER plans for Howie and Eight for that fight scene but Howie took over. I guess it worked because the chapter and the next one definitely flowed easier. Thanks for the reivew Steph! :)
Date: 09/28/13 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aw he wants to ditch Howie? Hopefully he won't though! This is very intriguing Lore and I'm sure there's lots of action to come!
Author's Response: Of course he wants to ditch Howie... he wants to be a loner right now. Heh. Thanks for the review.. I am sure I will get some action in here at some point. Heh
Author's Response: Of course he wants to ditch Howie... he wants to be a loner right now. Heh. Thanks for the review.. I am sure I will get some action in here at some point. Heh
Date: 08/29/13 04:37 am Title: Chapter 2
Hopefully nothing is in that cave and hopefully they get far away from the guards.
This story is very different Lore, I'm wondering what will happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Steph. I hope that you like where this story goes. :)
Date: 08/27/13 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
Damn this was a good chapter, I'm just wondering what will happen next. update like now!
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it. This sort of started in its own and this is what happened. I hoped I described it well enough that prior understood what was going on and did not get lost. My brain had the image but putting it in words for others was difficult.
Date: 08/27/13 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hola long time no talk. I opened up and was intrigued. I could just picture the whole setting and badass AJ. :)
Author's Response: Hi!!!!!!! So glad you opened this. This is the story that keeps plaguing me but other stories keep pushing aside. It is definitely my most out there story to date and I hope you continue to like it.
Author's Response: Hi!!!!!!! So glad you opened this. This is the story that keeps plaguing me but other stories keep pushing aside. It is definitely my most out there story to date and I hope you continue to like it.
Date: 08/07/13 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really excited about this story Lore, great start! I look forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph. I have the second chapter written but I want a third before I post it. I really hope I can do the plot I have four this story justice.
Date: 08/07/13 01:14 am Title: Chapter 1
oooh...I'm intrigued....more soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review. It means a lot to me that you took a chance on this story. I hope to keep you intrigued as I continue. I hope to get a second chapter posted before the weekend. :-)
