Date: 10/21/13 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Is it wrong that I laughed at the part where Brian attacked the reporter? Lol
Just want to say you done it again! I've enjoyed all your stories and always forgot to post my feedback. Can't wait until the next story makes it's debut!
Author's Response: Thanks, Shania! Glad you enjoyed it! I think the mental image of Brian attacking a reporter is kind of funny myself. LOL
Date: 10/14/13 07:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I just read this entire story in one sitting. I couldn't stop reading. What a great story! Thank you for posting, and I am looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :O)
Date: 09/29/13 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
So, I just finished reading ALL of the chapters. I just couldn't stop ... OMG! I NEED to know what is going to happen!!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks!! I'll be updating on Friday! :O)
Date: 09/29/13 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
My detailed review was already received via text. That one was merely a formality lol Seriously though, when they get out of this mess Howie better sign up for a self defence class because he clearly needs it!
Author's Response: He does need it, I agree with you there! lol
Date: 09/16/13 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL To answer your question, I've been reading 4 of 5 chapters at a time on my Kindle and then coming over to my computer to review them all at once because it's too slow on my Kindle. I knew that was the only way I was going to get caught up, though, cause I would not have been able to sit here and read that many chapters in a row on my computer!
Author's Response: I thought it was something like that because I would be answering a review you had just posted when another one would suddenly show up! lmao
Date: 08/30/13 07:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm..... I'm of course hoping that the other guys will have found some way to be gone when Tim goes after them. And the pharmacist in me says, "Stop giving the man who is bleeding internally aspirin, Tim! Especially if you want him to be your living new brother!"
Author's Response: lmao I know, right? That's why I chose aspirin. I think the pharmacist in you will love the chapter I am in the process of writing now. :O) And no worries about the guys, I'm sure by the Tim gets there, they will have already been eaten! hehe Thanks, Emily!
Date: 08/28/13 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hello, Mare. *waves*
I am officially starting to read the story again. lol. Where should I start? They say chapter 1 is important because it will tell the reader if they still want to pursue reading the story or not. I clicked the story because it's your story, and I know how awesome it would be. But after reading the first chapter, I am hooked because it has this factor that will make you want to read more, make you want to find out the answers to so many unanswered question: Why did they left the city and ran to the woods, who is visior no. 1 and 2 (as it's obvious that Candice, visitor no. 4 and 5 were just lost in the woods, or were they?), Was the $150,000 was the only reason why they ran, would we and Tim ever find out the real reason? These are the things that would make me hit the 'Next' button.
Poor Timothy, my heart aches for all those children whose childhood were taken away from them. Even though little timmy was already 10 years old, it was still a big change for him especially that his favorite toys and his dog weren't brought with him. I just hope his Mommy made everything so little Timmy was happy and loved.
Author's Response: *waves back* first of all, thank you for taking the time to not only read, but apparently reread. I was really worried about starting a story with a guy who no one knows or cares about so I'm glad that you found him interesting enough to want to know more about him as well as about what was going on within the story. A lot of those questions you posed will be answered as you go along. I agree, Tim has had it rough. Even though he is no doubt the villain in this story, I wanted people to like him and understand that maybe he's that way for a reason. Again as you go along, I think that image gets painted a little clearer. Thanks again, Ritz! :O) Your review rocked! lol
Date: 08/11/13 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mare,
Glad you got your mojo back! You have this uncanny ability in creating creepy villiams which appear to be normal.(Trish from the Bible trilogy and Ariana in "Scars") I'm still unsure of my feelings about Tim.....granted, he did kidnap Howie and Nick, but his isolation has warped him.
His remark about Howie looking out for Nick I thought was ironic considering baby bro wanted to come with Howie to look out for him and to get help for the others. (Maybe one day Nick will finally accept that he will always be the baby and the others will always see him at a certain age....atleast, that's what my baby sister says! I'm 16 years older than she is and she's right to a certain extent.)
Like the cliffie at the end....will he or won't he send help for the others? Again, great start Mare. I look forward to reading more. However, my reviews will be a little erratic....we return to school this week!
Pammy
Author's Response:
Thanks, Pammy! I wish I had the spark to start this story at the beginning of the summer and not the end lol I think you hit the nail right on the head about Nick and how the other's percieve him as opposed to maybe how he sees himself, although I do think he enjoys his role as the baby quite a bit. LOL And thanks for the compliments about my villians. I really try to make them human and not totally handle bar moustache bad guys. There is a reason they act the way they do and it's usually not entirely their fault.
Good luck with the start of school and just read when you can. I'm doing things different and pretty much posting a chapter a day so it'll be here waiting for you. Nice to see you reading my stuff again! :O)
Date: 08/10/13 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
YAY Mare!! Glad to see you're writing a new story! I love your writing style & the suspense fics! Great chapter & I was thinking it was Kevin that was the "tall one" lol
Author's Response:
Well, Kevin is tall! LOL Thanks, Carrie! :O) It's nice to see you back and writing again as well!
Date: 08/08/13 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
After reading Julie's review, I have to throw it out there that at first I thought it was Tim Richardson, too! It fit, until he was all kidnapping Backstreet Boys and stuff.
Author's Response:
LMAO yeah, maybe I should mention that as a disclaimer in my next chapter. Sorry, Tim! I forgot you existed! Well not really but I forgot your name was the same as my little creepy, lunatics!
Date: 08/08/13 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, this is definitely an intriguing start! I'm really interested to know what the deal with this Tim character is, exactly, and I spent a long time trying to figure out who "the little one" was. I actually assumed maybe we were going old school and it was Nick! Howie's a very good choice for captive, though. Excited to read more!
Author's Response:
Well that was very insightful of you because I did never mention when this was taking place exactly. LOL you could have very well been right! I mean if we were talking 94 or 95 then pretty much everyone would tower over Nick and he would clearly be the smaller one. good thinking Sherlock! This almost did take place back then! and who knows it might still be in the past. Just another mystery. Thanks for reading! :O) I do like the idea of Howie being held captive. Poor guy needs some kind of attention! hehe
Date: 08/08/13 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1
So huzzah for the official return of Mare! I told you this already but this is an amazing start. I was shocked you didn't start with the Boys but I think that's what made this story even better. It's creepy, addictive and interesting all wrapped up into one and I can't wait to see where this goes!
...So...should I walk out of your reviews naked? LOL.
Author's Response:
Whoa, I was just checking mail when your review popped up! Yay! I'm so relieved to see that everyone likes that I didn't start with the boys right off the bat. You know that's what I was most worried about. And woohoo to creppy Tim. As far as you walking around my review naked, I'll leave that up to you! LOL Thanks, Rose!
Date: 08/08/13 10:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow.
Wow.
I love, really love, that you've started the story from Tim's pov. It's creepy, scary and interesting.
I can't wait to see what's the destiny for the other three, given that Nick was the one together with Howie.
Wow.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Cinzia! I am loving all this creepy talk! LOL I'm glad you liked the start, like I told Julie I was worried about starting off with Tim.
Date: 08/08/13 10:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Uh oh this tim guy kidnapped them? He doesn't sound like he wants to help anybody, he's a creeper. Loving this so far, Mare and welcome back!!! I am really happy to see you post something new agsin :)
Author's Response:
Yup, well two of them at least. Thanks, Tracy! I think getting all your feedback for the older stuff this summer helped get me going as well! :O)
Date: 08/08/13 08:05 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG Mare, this is amazing!! I really hoped the new CD would inspire you to write more, and I'm so glad it did.
Poor boys, I hope they get away, but I'm sure that's not going to happen for a while!
I haven't forgot about Scars either, will get back to that now that I've finished studying :)
Author's Response:
Yes, thanks to Kevin and the CD I feel newly BSB reborn! LOL I just hope it lasts! I'm going to take full advantage of it for now though! Hope your second test went well!! :O)
